Quote Originally Posted by MagicianMan5 View Post
Zanaril got right to the point. just thank the gods he did not provide explicit details. now water-smurf, your story was captivating, with the obvious that it is a love/hate thing going on.
Ah yes, MM5 took the words right out of my mouth. But I think with a pairing like Redcloak and V the initial enmity is far deeper than V and Z's could ever be (I think), so the slower progression is to be expected. Though it's true that V/Z descends into madness whatever really fast - maybe Zanaril's fic could use slightly more story padding in between. But not too much. The cuteness must prevail in the end.

Anyway, Water-smurf (I think I've seen you on FF.net?): the character development is great; they stuck to their canon personalities very well. Though I can't really see myself drawing a goblin for it. Yet.

And i still dont haveany feed back on how terrible my story was.
You should have continued it. I'd love to see how V/Haley pans out.

This forum thing seems to be quite addictive. Oh dear.