Ah yes, MM5 took the words right out of my mouth. But I think with a pairing like Redcloak and V the initial enmity is far deeper than V and Z's could ever be (I think), so the slower progression is to be expected. Though it's true that V/Z descends intomadnesswhatever really fast - maybe Zanaril's fic could use slightly more story padding in between. But not too much. The cuteness must prevail in the end.
Anyway, Water-smurf (I think I've seen you on FF.net?): the character development is great; they stuck to their canon personalities very well. Though I can't really see myself drawing a goblin for it. Yet.
You should have continued it. I'd love to see how V/Haley pans out.And i still dont haveany feed back on how terrible my story was.
This forum thing seems to be quite addictive. Oh dear.