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    Quote Originally Posted by TheBibliophile View Post
    What the hey, I'll do another pairing.
    Bib (can I call you that?), the mitosis is hilarious. So are half-naked, smoking unsavory individuals. I think the idea of a loveless arranged marriage is great - plus it's also entirely plausible, so now we can write ride wride on the village bicycle without Kyrie-guilt. Also, hooray V/H! At long last (because I was too lazy to write something by myself)!

    But the grammar (tenses mostly) is a bit inconsistent. The "anyway" at the start of the second paragraph seems pretty out of place.

    If you're interested, I can prepare a list of comments and things on the story.

    When they said A levels would be hard, they meant it.
    Oh no my 'O'-levels...

    You know what I find amusing about Biology? We have to use the specific vocabulary (hence why I keep getting centrioles, centromeres and chromotids mixed up) but they all basically translate to "the coloured thing" or "the thing in the middle".
    But centrioles are the things at the sides! But yeah, chromatids and chromosomes are a pain in the rear.
    Last edited by Saeyan; 2009-09-10 at 09:42 AM.