Bib (can I call you that?), the mitosis is hilarious. So are half-naked, smoking unsavory individuals. I think the idea of a loveless arranged marriage is great - plus it's also entirely plausible, so now we canwriteridewride on the village bicycle without Kyrie-guilt. Also, hooray V/H! At long last (because I was too lazy to write something by myself)!
But the grammar (tenses mostly) is a bit inconsistent. The "anyway" at the start of the second paragraph seems pretty out of place.
If you're interested, I can prepare a list of comments and things on the story.
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But centrioles are the things at the sides! But yeah, chromatids and chromosomes are a pain in the rear.You know what I find amusing about Biology? We have to use the specific vocabulary (hence why I keep getting centrioles, centromeres and chromotids mixed up) but they all basically translate to "the coloured thing" or "the thing in the middle".