Liantrius: The Last Meaningful Fight...

[Tiffanie Lirle]

I find the thread title ironic, seeing as we really have no idea as to what in the nine hells is going on here. As for the art, I expect to see some huge improvements after that pm convo of ours, V'ict.

You need to work on the expressions, and make the motions more fluid. Look at comic 2, the black haired guy has practically the same exact pose throughout the whole thing. That's just lazy.

You really should work on your panels as well, having them spaced so far apart is completely wasteful and unnecessary. (It's also pretty ugly.)

I would also suggest using a different font, comic sans seems to be the default font used in most of the comics around here. Also, you can see that some of the text is squished. Never stretch or shrink font with the speech bubbles.

You could also put a little more effort into detailing the background.

Edit - And for the readers sake, put all your comics into spoiler boxes in the first post.