Crack Pairings II - Brain Bleach not Supplied

[Silverraptor]

I share this sentiment. The last section would make an interesting plot twist.

I love how you tied this up. My only nit-pick is that your ambiguous-gender-writing needs a bit of work, but then again it's not something that you'd need outside of writing about adrogynous elves.

What part of my story suffers from unambigous elf problems?

But I'm glad you guys love it. I actually had this entire scene presented to me in a dream.

Edit: And if you want to see more of my story creating work, keep an eye on my fan comic.