Quote Originally Posted by Silverraptor View Post
Well, it's time for part 4 of the Inkyrius series.
I like it.

You survived longer in bed.
Naughty Kyrie!

"Oh, you mean that idiot blond human. He was easy. Just conjured up an illusion for an eye-patch stand."
That made me laugh.

There are a few typos:

Could still feel the pain from the last spell in the targeted area.
Had I succeeded, then there would've been nothing to threaten our family again.
That was the happiest moment in my life.
Also, I found using "the" instead of "his" or "her" to be a little... not clumsy, but it felt odd.