Quote Originally Posted by Kaytara View Post
I really like your descriptions. :D The characterisation is good, too, and the scene is something I can imagine taking place. :) One nitpick, however, is that Miko is probably in her twenties, and Shojo was in his eighties, so probably too old to be her father. Him being her grandfather, on the other hand, I would totally buy.
Eh. Science today can do ALOT, so I wouldn't be surprised if magic could do it.

A wizard did it.