Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
*sighs*
I may drop off the radar for a while. I'm puttering out. Going through some rough stuff and, while it's therapeutic, I hate this wretched spawn masquerading as literature that I've been spewing for the past few days.
Sorry to hear you're going through some bad times. That's no reason to not give yourself the full credit you deserve for the masterpiece you've made so far.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
It's not up to my standards. Characterization is screwed up.
They seem spot-on to me.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
Plot line is mussed.
Well, you see further than I do, so you might notice something I don't, but I don't see any problems with the plot.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
Tiasal is one-dimensional and blank.
I don't think so, but even if she, I don't really blame her, never knowing her parents and all.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
V's canon kids have been butchered.
Again, I don't think so. We haven't really seen much of them, and they've grown up a lot (probably gone through elf-puberty too), so it's near-impossible to butcher them.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
I've turned V and Reddy into piles of goo.
Not quite sure what you mean here. If it's characterization you're talking about, I disagree. If you mean then it's devolved into "I love you" "No, I love you", then I'd also disagree and say that at least it'd be cute.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
Every other phrase is awkward and stilted.
I don't think it's been awkward at all.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
It's all total crap. I'm sick of hating everything I make.
I really don't think it's total crap, but I can kind of see where you're coming from. I utterly detest most of what I write, and think it's all unworthy to wipe the bottom of the unholiest being in existence. We all go through that at times.
Originally Posted by
Water-Smurf
I'm going to try to hold off on posting anything until I'm in an emotional state more fit for writing stuff good enough for people to see. I don't know how long that will take. I'm not sure it's going to happen at this point.
Sorry to hear you won't be posting anything new, I really do love your stories. That said, your health (emotional or physical) is more important than the stories, so make sure to take as long as you need, and then take some more time after that, alright?