Water-Smurf: I was a few sentences in to it before I figured out it was a "present" chapter rather than a Tiasal chapter. Other than going "Xykon? Rocks? Gate? Oh!" it was quite well done.

CheeseMuncher: Nicely done, seems like it could easily be part of the canon.

BatRobin: Amusing, certainly. I'm not sure Nale would randomly help someone he found in the snow, though.