Ah, you want to keep the wackiness down to a minimum?
I'll keep that in mind for the next installment.
Actually: my first post - too wacky, insufficiently wacky, or Just Right?
EDIT:
SpoilerMy current intention is make few of the characters suck.
Luna & Dom suck, for sure. But Melna is going to have some honest-to-god drama (mixed in with some comedic trauma), Hansi is going to be a Memetic Badass (and superb lov-ar), Spark will be zany - but all the Orcs will be played as good, dramatic characters.
I'm afraid I'll have to keep Pimp Jacob - it makes sense that all the Deegans seem somewhat unbalanced when viewed through the lens of realistic characters, no?