Crack Pairings VII - Bring Bottled Water, Our Water is Spiked With Love Potion

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It's okay. There are some grammatical errors, and I feel there's something...I dunno. Maybe show, don't tell? (Though I feel that's a problem for me too.)

eh crack pairings isnt something I do with pure devotion. I just make a plot screw around, and get it up. I have gotten some good advice because in the earlier works perspective was an issue for some people, I am now currently sticking with a 3rd person limited switching between characters. Grammar has always been the bane of my writing things, be it school or anything.

But atleast you were honest. I hated when people would say some of my things were great out of pity. its why I almost gave up bass. Anyways you were honest, thats cool, and most importantly thanks for the advice.