Awesome. A new victim!
Er... I mean, newcomer - welcome newcomer
Wow. Just wow. That was epic I love fight scenes, and that was very well done. Wonderful battle, and so sad!
Only one point of critism (which is mostly a stylistic thing):
Here, I don't think you need the 'seemingly'. His voice was supposed to erupt from his body yes? You were trying to express exactly how he's feeling and just how he's screaming - anger and hatred and fear all in one right? Using 'seemingly' actually lessens the impact of the 'erupt from my body' part. I would take it out.
Also, on a purely physical note, technically we talk out of our body (the mouth), so why can't he 'erupt' instead of just yell?
We could tell you, but then we'd have to kill you
Translated: I have no idea what it means, but I've seen it before and am also curious. Machuchang, what does it mean?
edit: and there you go answering the question before I get in...