The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!

[ukuleleninja]

Here is my first Webcomic on the origin of my avatar. This all started when Introbulus spontaneously PM's me with a short story, that is now the text in comic #1. Thank you!

Comic 1: (The Legend Begins)

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Comic 2 (The journey PT.1)

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Tell me how I'm doing, constructive critiscism is wholeheartedly approved of!

[CrimsonAngel]

Booby!

[MelWhite]

Uhm... if he tossed the book away, how could he peruse it later?

(yeah, I know, picky detail)

[Domochevsky]

Lots of tiny text in a swirly font. >_>

First thing i'd recommend is either scaling it up and/or changing to something less... well, swirly.

(Can't comment on the content due to, well, you know. Art seems decent, though.)

[Krüsher]

really good art. storyline has caught me cuz, duh! Boobies. But I have one question, how is the art so good? Mine seems bad and I think its because i dont know how to shade...sooo how do I do that?

[Maxios]

I like this webcomic. I used inkscape before, but all my drawings stunk.

[Domochevsky]

really good art. storyline has caught me cuz, duh! Boobies. But I have one question, how is the art so good? Mine seems bad and I think its because i dont know how to shade...sooo how do I do that?

Its fairly easy to get some basic shading going on. Depending on your tools it's sufficient to make a new layer, set the transparency to something like 35% and then go black on it where it should be darker. (Like, "the left side and below", as seen in this comic.)

[ukuleleninja]

really good art. storyline has caught me cuz, duh! Boobies. But I have one question, how is the art so good? Mine seems bad and I think its because i dont know how to shade...sooo how do I do that?

Do multiple layers of shading. If you zoom in on the wing of my bird, you will notice several lines.

[Jokasti]

Shouldn't this be in Fancomics if it's not hosted off site?
Good first page though.

[Stabber]

Cool.......ninja stealth birds.

[Maxios]

When's the next one coming out? Perhaps he could fight some parrot samurai or show us his awesome ninja skills?

[ukuleleninja]

I'm not too sure If I will be able to get them out too frequently, but I'll try to get at least one soon.

EDIT:

Working on one that should be done today or tomorrow.

2nd EDIT:

Done! Check it out.

[super dark33]

where are the eyes of te shark-thing-dude?

[Domochevsky]

Good question, that. (The next has a good size now. )

[Maxios]

The eyes are those two line thigns I believe. You're doing a good job on the webcomic.

[ukuleleninja]

Thanks. The shark-thing actually has no eyes, and uses it's tentacules to sense movement.

[Maxios]

Ah. That makes sense.

[Krüsher]

grammar nazi time! I think it's "burst" not bursted
Otherwise, doing well man!

[Reshbj]

I don't like the new one quite as much as the first. It looks rather lazily done, almost copy-paste looking. Don't get me wrong, I do like everything else, I just think it could've been put together more nicely. The text could be smaller too; it was just fine in the first strip, if a little hard to read. I think it would be better in a new typeface at the old size.

Will there be an overarching plot?

[Maxios]

When's the new one comping out?

[Morph Bark]

Nice! There should be more creativeness involving blue-footed boobies.

This should be in the fancomic section though... but I don't know off the top of my head what mods are in charge of moving thread away from this board, or to that one.

[Maxios]

It's official now. This thread is died