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    I'd love to see Clarkes Third Law as the contest to come up, I'd like a contest involving science and technology period. I'm all for science fantasy.

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    I'd love to see Clarkes Third Law as the contest to come up, I'd like a contest involving science and technology period. I'm all for science fantasy.
    I concur! Though I've already voted...
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    Just posted my [MASSIVE] entry, the Deepcaster! I am aware that it is a little bit rough, and I still have to finalize and balance a few things. But, I'd love some PEACH about it!

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    Alright, in the middle of doing trophies as we speak!

    In the mean time, I'm lifting the "two per person" restriction for suggestions for the next 24 hours.

    So the next two suggestions made, period, will be our 9th and 10th option and we'll move right to voting!

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    Trophies have been sent out. Once more, congratulations to those who won last month.

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    Airborne Anomalies - Anything having to do with flying creatures, classes that fly, airborn illness, spells that involve air, flying, so on. (and didn't Sam get rid of one of his earlier ones to take one of mine?)
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    is it too late to put something into the spell it out competition? I feel I have a good one for this contest
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    is it too late to put something into the spell it out competition? I feel I have a good one for this contest
    Its going until the end of the month.
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    schweet! XD
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    Ooooooh! I rather like that idea, Inyusha. The battlefield control abilities of that spidocterpus is pretty cool...
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    Ooooooh! I rather like that idea, Inyusha. The battlefield control abilities of that spidocterpus is pretty cool...
    Thanks :D just wait until its finished and actually has stats XD it will be awesome


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    Airborne Anomalies - Anything having to do with flying creatures, classes that fly, airborn illness, spells that involve air, flying, so on. (and didn't Sam get rid of one of his earlier ones to take one of mine?)
    That's 9.

    Any more folks?

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    Mutagenic madness? A monster with variable aspects depending on how it chooses to mutate, a mutant race, or a class that slowly adapts to environments and changes its abilities as progression happens, eventually transforming into a big ugly monster?

    are these suggestions for the next contest or something?
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    {table=head]Working Name|Theme|Votes

    The Song of My People|Music |0
    When Two Become One|Biological Symbiosis (think symbionts)|0
    A Symbol of the Past|Runes, Sigils, and More|0
    The Call of a Hero|Dragons|0
    The Third Law|Science and Technology|0
    Gamer's Gambit|Video games|0
    Urban Legends|Cryptozoology and Urban Legends|0
    Homebrew Homebrews|Crafting|0
    Airborne Anomalies|Air, Flying and the Sky|0
    Mutagenic Madness|Evolution and Mutation|0[/table]



    Alright, that's ten themes, so let's begin the voting!

    For this first draft pick, everyone will receive 5 votes to cast and you can't vote for a theme more than once. The voting will stay open till Monday at 11:59, at which point the numbers will be cut from 10 to 5 for the second draft of voting!
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    Song of my People
    Urban Legends
    Homebrew Homebrew
    The Call of a Hero <- My top vote
    Clarke's Third Law
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    In order from most want to least want out of my 5 votes

    Mutagenic madness
    When two become one
    The third law
    Gamers gambit
    homebrew homebrews

    As another note: please dont do Song of my people, I just did a music base class for the base class challenge thread
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    In a moment of goofiness, I typed out a quick prestige class based on Magic Missile. Sorry for encroaching on your territory, Razanir. 8(


    I'm typing it in now.
    There was something here and in the avatar box, and there will eventually be again. I just need to figure out what I want...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Osagasu View Post
    In a moment of goofiness, I typed out a quick prestige class based on Magic Missile. Sorry for encroaching on your territory, Razanir. 8(


    I'm typing it in now.
    I'm sure there are a lot of ways to go with that!
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    {table=head]Working Name|Theme|Votes

    The Song of My People|Music |1
    When Two Become One|Biological Symbiosis (think symbionts)|1
    A Symbol of the Past|Runes, Sigils, and More|0
    The Call of a Hero|Dragons|1
    The Third Law|Science and Technology|2
    Gamer's Gambit|Video games|1
    Urban Legends|Cryptozoology and Urban Legends|1
    Homebrew Homebrews|Crafting|2
    Airborne Anomalies|Air, Flying and the Sky|0
    Mutagenic Madness|Evolution and Mutation|1[/table]

    Votes tallied to here.

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    My votes, in no certain order:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Osagasu View Post
    In a moment of goofiness, I typed out a quick prestige class based on Magic Missile. Sorry for encroaching on your territory, Razanir. 8(


    I'm typing it in now.
    'Tis fine. However, I see your Red Mage and raise you one KAMEHAMEHADOKEN! (I'll find some way to work that into an augment)

    EDIT: The initial draft of my entry is done. Let me know if:
    • The increased dice seem balanced
    • I have enough interesting augments
    • The augment rules make sense
    • I have enough class features (there's a few dead levels)


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    It's up. My votes for the next competition are:

    The Song of my People
    Symbol of the Past
    Third Law
    Homebrew Homebrews
    Gamer's Gambit
    There was something here and in the avatar box, and there will eventually be again. I just need to figure out what I want...

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    {table=head]Working Name|Theme|Votes

    The Song of My People|Music |2
    When Two Become One|Biological Symbiosis (think symbionts)|2
    A Symbol of the Past|Runes, Sigils, and More|2
    The Call of a Hero|Dragons|1
    The Third Law|Science and Technology|4
    Gamer's Gambit|Video games|2
    Urban Legends|Cryptozoology and Urban Legends|1
    Homebrew Homebrews|Crafting|3
    Airborne Anomalies|Air, Flying and the Sky|1
    Mutagenic Madness|Evolution and Mutation|2[/table]

    Votes tallied to here.

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    So, it's time for a run down! We'll start off this time with the [b]Scorching Mage[b]!

    As always, we start with grammar and such:


    Intelligent Ray - You forgot to capitalize "he" in the second sentence.

    And that's all I see for grammar.


    • You didn't mention any credits for the image you used or if you have permission by its creator/copyright holder to use it.
    • You need to fix the formatting on the prerequisites. The actual things are listed, but not their qualifier text.
    • Why doesn't the class have all Knowledges as class skills? Sorcerers only get Knowledge (Arcana), but the Knowledge (Planes) just seems arbitrarily there.
    • Why does this class grant Light Armor proficiency but doesn't affect Arcane Spell Failure at all?
    • With all the potential metamagic abuse, I wonder if 7/10 casting is a little much. I mean, I know it's evocation magic and all, but it's a question I'm pondering.
    • It's more a pet peeve than anything, but spell names are usually italicized.
    • I love the concept and feel of this class. It's silly enough to make me smile, but not so silly that someone wouldn't take it seriously in a more dour game. Good job!



    And done.

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    My defense of Call of a Hero:
    I have a fun idea for a prestige class, that I might even make anyway if it's not chosen. My entry would be a 5 level prestige class where the class features are themed after the monomyth

    EDIT: Added fluff. And shout outs to the Master of Missiles and 8-Bit Theater. Check the spoiler tags
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tanuki Tales View Post
    So, it's time for a run down! We'll start off this time with the [b]Scorching Mage[b]!

    As always, we start with grammar and such:


    Intelligent Ray - You forgot to capitalize "he" in the second sentence.

    And that's all I see for grammar.


    • You didn't mention any credits for the image you used or if you have permission by its creator/copyright holder to use it.
    • You need to fix the formatting on the prerequisites. The actual things are listed, but not their qualifier text.
    • Why doesn't the class have all Knowledges as class skills? Sorcerers only get Knowledge (Arcana), but the Knowledge (Planes) just seems arbitrarily there.
    • Why does this class grant Light Armor proficiency but doesn't affect Arcane Spell Failure at all?
    • With all the potential metamagic abuse, I wonder if 7/10 casting is a little much. I mean, I know it's evocation magic and all, but it's a question I'm pondering.
    • It's more a pet peeve than anything, but spell names are usually italicized.
    • I love the concept and feel of this class. It's silly enough to make me smile, but not so silly that someone wouldn't take it seriously in a more dour game. Good job!



    And done.
    Responses to the list: (thanks for taking a look at it)
    1. I pulled the image off of Google search but I'll look up the artist and put in credit.
    2. I'll take care of reformatting the prerequisites tomorrow.
    3. I used a modified version of the Magus skill list as the basis for this class actually.
    4. As for the armor proficiency, I sorta forgot to add that I guess. But also because I was doing this from a Magus mindset, so I didn't think to add it in.
    5. 7/10 CL progression is because a sorcerer that takes 10 levels in this class won't get 9th level spells. And according to the 3.5 forums, not having 9th level spells is equivalent to neutering your class so hard you might as well stop playing cuz you're doing it WRONG!! Anyway, I was worried that cutting too much casting progression would make the class unappealing.
    6. I never noticed whether or not spell names were italicized, but its a quick fix.
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    I'm glad you like the flavor. I was originally going to cut out some of the sillier stuff but I thought it was too much fun to take out.

    Posted from phone. Anticipate errors.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elricaltovilla View Post
    Responses to the list: (thanks for taking a look at it)
    1. I pulled the image off of Google search but I'll look up the artist and put in credit.
    Well, it's a little more than just credit. You need their explicit permission now.

    3. I used a modified version of the Magus skill list as the basis for this class actually.
    4. As for the armor proficiency, I sorta forgot to add that I guess. But also because I was doing this from a Magus mindset, so I didn't think to add it in.
    I never thought of the Magus when it comes to blasting.

    5. 7/10 CL progression is because a sorcerer that takes 10 levels in this class won't get 9th level spells. And according to the 3.5 forums, not having 9th level spells is equivalent to neutering your class so hard you might as well stop playing cuz you're doing it WRONG!! Anyway, I was worried that cutting too much casting progression would make the class unappealing.
    Well, that's one school of thought that folks have concerning the Wizard and the Sorcerer and it's one that always struck me as odd when its held by the same folks who espouse Tier 3 as being where the game should be aimed at or say that DnD/Pathfinder needs to be balanced, etc.

    I'm personally of the school of thought, and I know I've mentioned this in this thread before, that if a Prestige Class gives some real good things to the character taking it and is aimed at casters specifically, that they should take a shot to the gut for their spell levels.

    I mean, does it honestly seem fair that Wizard 5/PrC 10/Wizard 5 gets 9th level spells and is a Mini-Balor? What did that character lose when taking the levels in their PrC that still made Wizard 20 appear as a viable trade off with pure mechanics?



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    I'm glad you like the flavor. I was originally going to cut out some of the sillier stuff but I thought it was too much fun to take out.
    Good call.

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    I think I'll also give out some critiques, since that's the spirit of the thing!

    Razanir's Bombadier:

    I see that it is still incomplete, but I like what you've got thus far. In the tradition of Pathfinder, you have various menus and selectable options as the class levels up. I do see a few minor things (Under Channeled, you say it like it will be applied to a Ranged Attack, but it doesn't actually ever say "to"...).

    So far, looks good! Keep improving... Remember to look for out of combat utility, and if the spell list isn't going to get bigger, the class needs more features.
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    Quote Originally Posted by SamBurke View Post
    I think I'll also give out some critiques, since that's the spirit of the thing!

    Razanir's Bombadier:

    I see that it is still incomplete, but I like what you've got thus far. In the tradition of Pathfinder, you have various menus and selectable options as the class levels up. I do see a few minor things (Under Channeled, you say it like it will be applied to a Ranged Attack, but it doesn't actually ever say "to"...).

    So far, looks good! Keep improving... Remember to look for out of combat utility, and if the spell list isn't going to get bigger, the class needs more features.
    I already fixed the typo in Channeled. My main questions now:
    -Do you think I have enough options so far?
    -If I add a few out of combat features, would that potentially be enough?
    -Any ideas for out of combat?
    -Any ideas for a capstone?
    -Do you think it would be better as a dodge bonus instead of a deflection bonus?
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