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2013-04-18, 11:17 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
- I'm basing it off of the idea of spells themselves, completely redoing the SPELL system.
- I don't see any way to recover motes. I assume at rest?
- If it's a full caster, I'd expect their Key modifier to tie into how many times they can 'cast' per day, but I don't see anything like that. Is this intentional?
- The interaction between different runes and range is pretty cool sounding, but there's some concerns:
What does "Make an additional Jump" in the Effect of Depth list mean?Mostly nevermind, but you may want to make it more apparent that there's a canon list.
- Patterns sound a lot like shape and essence invocations. Not a concern, just making sure this was intentional.
- Gathering Designs is pretty damn cool, and adds a lot more action economy to the class.
- Now "Remember the Name" is stuck in my head... (Concentrated Power of Will)
- What happens when you enter an encounter with a design stored? If, for some reason, it's still there when you end the encounter, does it go away?
- Explosion wake... define edge. Leading edge, all squares in the effect that border squares outside the effect, all squares outside the effect that border squares inside it?
- Apotheosis Infusion; do you mean "Infused Pattern"?
- Undeath Rune. Does this mean anything knocked out by this rune automatically dies?
- Shimmering Rune; Enthrall doesn't have a default definition.
- Speed Rune; do they get an extra move action every turn they're affected by it, or just one and then it dissipates?
- I see a few runes with a 0 mote cost, but nothing in particular that works wholly as a cantrip-type mechanic. Minor issue, but most casters have them.
- Linkbender; I don't see anywhere that a link is described in the document.
- Sorcerer; You may want to make it clear that the Runes known is being reduced.
- Force of Will could be clearer. "While the deepcaster uses its Intelligence modifier for the DC of its patterns and designs, the Sorcerer uses its Charisma modifier." or something of the sort. Kinda... distant wording. ;)
Formatting issues:
- There's a comma after Runes in the Special section, but no second feature. Also, there's no "Runes" feature in the class features.
- The DC calculation, while it works correctly, does not read the same as all other DC calculations.
- I had to copy and paste the ⅓ into another window to see what it was.
- In Favored Designs: Bigsby, Mordenkainen. "You gain an additional Design at level 8, 13, and 18. " (Should be Favored Design)
- Beacon Rule; "t fails a will save, 7ou know whe"
- Greatness of Mind and Body appear to have their effects reversed.
- "Element of" Fire doesn't follow the naming scheme.
- In Archetypes, the "replaces" line always goes at the end. This is internally inconsistent in your document as well.
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2013-04-18, 12:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
Let me use Cleric as an example, but all of the other ones follow this pattern:
The Difficulty Class for a saving throw against a cleric's spell is 10 + the spell level + the cleric's Wisdom modifier.
The Difficulty Class for a saving throw against a rune or design is 10 + 1/3 the deepcaster's level + the deepcaster's Intelligence modifier.
This helps keep the DC reading consistent with other pathfinder classes, while also more easily allowing for prestige classes, feats, and traits that increase the deepcaster's effective level, since class level is pretty set in stone.
I've also noticed that you use class level a few times; this is redundant, since in Pathfinder "level" automatically means class level unless otherwise specified.Last edited by Ilorin Lorati; 2013-04-18 at 12:41 PM.
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2013-04-18, 01:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-18, 07:18 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
Since I have no clue if the Bombardier is done yet....
Here's a run down on the Master of Missiles in the mean time!
As always, we start with grammar and formatting and junk:
Missile Mastery
- You have an errant bracket before magic missile in the second sentence.
And that's all for that bit as far as I noticed with a quick read through.
- This class highly amuses me. It's quite solid at what it intends to do and all the class features are quite poignant, flavorful and interesting. Good job!
- Do any of the class features qualify as Sp instead of Su? The former tag is used so infrequently that I honestly can't remember off the top of my head when you're exactly supposed to use it.
- Like with the Scorching Mage, I feel like the Metamagic abuse and other toothsome things this class gets you should cost more than just one caster level. I know you can't enter it until 7th or 8th level, but Magic Missile is already a "Hit: Always, Save: Nope" spell. It's the perfect delivery system for metamagic as is. That and losing another level of casting or two would make the second part of Missile Mastery more useful.
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Oh and there's still about 3 or so hours left to vote everyone. So if you haven't or haven't told your friends () about voting, here's your chance to do so!Last edited by Tanuki Tales; 2013-04-18 at 07:37 PM.
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2013-04-18, 11:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
I'm giving all three of my votes to Mutagenic Madness.
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2013-04-19, 09:04 AM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-19, 09:06 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
{table=head]Working Name|Theme|Votes
The Third Law|Science and Technology|0
Gamer's Gambit|Video games|0
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Well, we're down to the wire folks! You get 1 vote this time, the voting will close Sunday at 11:59 pm and only one of these two will walk away as May's contest theme!Last edited by Tanuki Tales; 2013-04-19 at 09:08 AM.
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2013-04-19, 09:10 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
I'll vote for gamer's gambit!
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2013-04-19, 09:21 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
{table=head]Working Name|Theme|Votes
The Third Law|Science and Technology|0
Gamer's Gambit|Video games|1
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Votes tallied to here.
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2013-04-19, 10:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-19, 10:31 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
{table=head]Working Name|Theme|Votes
The Third Law|Science and Technology|1
Gamer's Gambit|Video games|1
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Votes tallied to here.
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2013-04-19, 04:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
Fixed the tag error.
The active abilities are all used as spells, so they should all qualify as SLAs. At least, that's how I understood it.
I'll bring the CL back down one, but will be leaving the bonus to MM CL, since one more missile is kinda negligible anyways. I don't want to reduce it by 3, because that would be removing the ability for sorcerers to use 9th level spells.
Edit: Also, I vote for Gamer's Gambit.Last edited by Ilorin Lorati; 2013-04-19 at 04:25 PM.
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2013-04-19, 07:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-19, 07:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-19, 07:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
GMT -6 (Central)
We seem to have a coordination error! I guess the question is, what time zone are the deadlines based off of?Last edited by Deviston; 2013-04-19 at 07:27 PM.
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2013-04-19, 07:33 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
*face palm*
I just noticed, now, that I never actually specified that the contest runs off Eastern Standard Time, which it UTC-5. Though it's never actually come up before now.
Ugh.
Alright, this is totally my bad.
Deviston, I'll let you cast your votes for the previous round now and re-do the finals to reflect them. Keep in mind that you can only give 1 vote to 1 entry, not all 3 to 1.
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2013-04-19, 07:40 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
You sir are a blessing and a saint. Sorry to cause such a ruckus, and I'll cast only one vote for Mutagenic Madness. I think that brings it to the final voting round?
And thank you for the one-time free pass :) -5 from now on it is! Well, for the Grab Bag at least hahahaa
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2013-04-19, 11:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
Hardly.
Sorry to cause such a ruckus, and I'll cast only one vote for Mutagenic Madness. I think that brings it to the final voting round?
And thank you for the one-time free pass :) -5 from now on it is! Well, for the Grab Bag at least hahahaa
And what are your other two votes? It can matter.
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2013-04-20, 09:49 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
Final round Mutagen/Tech/Gaming... I'll cast my vote for Video Games
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2013-04-20, 10:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
Final vote for the third law.
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2013-04-20, 10:07 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread
Guys, per the last few posts, we're probably going to have to re-do the final round pending what Deviston votes on for the previous round.
So hold on to your votes for now.
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2013-04-20, 10:57 AM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-20, 05:28 PM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-21, 06:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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2013-04-21, 11:48 AM (ISO 8601)
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There was something here and in the avatar box, and there will eventually be again. I just need to figure out what I want...
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2013-04-21, 12:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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I hope Deviston comes back soon. Otherwise I might just have to roll to determine his other two votes.
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2013-04-21, 05:09 PM (ISO 8601)
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As it Happens,I plan om votimg for Gamers Gambit. i, too, a great idea. Speakimg of which, I claim Elizabeth from Bioshock Infinite as my inspiration... Just sayin.
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2013-04-21, 08:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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I'll vote for Gamer's Gambit.
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2013-04-21, 08:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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