Magic Sword: Fourth Edition Reborn

[Chainsaw Hobbit]

I like the first one a lot. Damn near perfect, really.

The second one is good, but it doesn't appear overly ... female. Maybe work on that a bit.

Thanks!

[Dark Elf Bard]

Well, how should it be changed?

[Chainsaw Hobbit]

Well, how should it be changed?

Bigger hips, maybe? Look up some female figure drawing tutorials.

Also, after looking at the dwarf, I've decided I want there to be a sort of short female Space Marine" look about her. Look at some of the Black Templar Space Marines, and see what you can do to capture some of the aesthetic.

Sorry if I'm a bit bossy and fickle. I really don't mean to be. If I'm getting too demanding, slap me.

[Gligarman2]

I am happy to report that with tomorrow's call to customer service of Adobe, I will be back in business! I am anxiously awaiting that hour! I apologise for the massive delay.

[Gligarman2]

Bigger hips, maybe? Look up some female figure drawing tutorials.

Also, after looking at the dwarf, I've decided I want there to be a sort of short female Space Marine" look about her. Look at some of the Black Templar Space Marines, and see what you can do to capture some of the aesthetic.

Sorry if I'm a bit bossy and fickle. I really don't mean to be. If I'm getting too demanding, slap me.

I see. Did I get that right?

(Just my nitpicking, but there are only male space marines, but the Sisters of Battle, because GW is sexist, or the Imperium is, or something.

[Chainsaw Hobbit]

I see. Did I get that right?

(Just my nitpicking, but there are only male space marines, but the Sisters of Battle, because GW is sexist, or the Imperium is, or something.

You did.

And I know. Thanks, though.

[Gligarman2]

Sorry. As you know, I should be ready to draw by next nightfall.

[Chainsaw Hobbit]

Sorry. As you know, I should be ready to draw by next nightfall.

Its fine. I'm glad you will be able to draw again. Thank you for your help, support, and effort!

[Dark Elf Bard]

Hey Gligar!

*pokes to the last page*

Whaddya think of my chicken scratchings?

[Gligarman2]

Well, the warlord's hands are kinda wonky, but they are no worse than mine. He's kinda thin for a norseman, and hemlooks slightly piratesque. The dwarf isn't very feminine, and seems kinda wispy still. However, the norseman is savage and aggressive, and I loved the idea of a dwarf using a pick as a weapon. Genius.

Is this satisfactory? Can you give a similar analysis of my work?

Good job. I need to start working soon. How much time did you spend on each? Mine take 2-3 days, but the dwarf took far longer as I was learning with photoshop. I am assuming you saved the images. If not, could Mr. Hobbit provide them?

Edit: Due to a problem, I have had to wait to use my computer until this night.

[Gligarman2]

Photoshop Obtained! Ding!

[Gligarman2]

First draft of the ravenfolk cleric done! What is needed to be revised? I just got this done quickly, so much may need to be changed. Much.

Here: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...vencleric.jpg/

Save, inform and delete, as usual!

[Gligarman2]

Well, do you have a 120x120 pony image?

Also *online brohoof back*

Also, PM the answer. to meYou know, keeping the thread on track.

Fourth Post in a row! Sorry, but no-one has responded to my other posts. Please look them over. Also, I have the Avatar picture, now what doctor of darkness?

[Dark Elf Bard]

Well, the warlord's hands are kinda wonky, but they are no worse than mine. He's kinda thin for a norseman, and hemlooks slightly piratesque. The dwarf isn't very feminine, and seems kinda wispy still. However, the norseman is savage and aggressive, and I loved the idea of a dwarf using a pick as a weapon. Genius.

Is this satisfactory? Can you give a similar analysis of my work?

Good job. I need to start working soon. How much time did you spend on each? Mine take 2-3 days, but the dwarf took far longer as I was learning with photoshop. I am assuming you saved the images. If not, could Mr. Hobbit provide them?

Edit: Due to a problem, I have had to wait to use my computer until this night.

I like yours. You may want to make your lines thicker, they seem amazingly thin to me.

Um, okay. Can you link it to me?

[Gligarman2]

Firstly, sorry for the quadruple post. It took place over a lot of time.

Secondly, I really appreciate your work. Thank you for the criticism.

Finally, here's that avatar picture link. http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...arversion.png/

(Could Chainsaw Hobbit please check my ravenfolk cleric for revisions and inform me of its saving?)

[Dark Elf Bard]

Okay. Wow, that's cool!

Now go to User CP, scroll to "Options," scroll all the way down, click oon the box for "Custom Avatar" and paste this link into the box:

http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/5...tarversion.png

[Gligarman2]

I've got the rogue done. Please save and inform.

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...lingrogue.jpg/

[Gligarman2]

Okay. Wow, that's cool!

Now go to User CP, scroll to "Options," scroll all the way down, click oon the box for "Custom Avatar" and paste this link into the box:

http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/5...tarversion.png

I used General Zoi's. I'm sure you know.

[Dark Elf Bard]

Me too! I copied you.

Can I put you on my Buddy List?

[Gligarman2]

There are buddy lists?

Where is Hobbit?

[Dark Elf Bard]

Yes! Click on my username, it'll say "Add DEB to your Buddy List." Can I add you?

Offline.

You look goooood. *highhoof*

[Gligarman2]

Highhoof. Also, yeah, you can add me. My third and fourth drawings are up, and Chainsaw hasn't revised them. I will keep working. How are things with you? Did you know Chainsaw has a blogspot, in which he reveals his name?

[Dark Elf Bard]

Yay! I added you, buddy!

And yes. I read it often, you chould check it out. It helps in my D&D games.

Do you know how to take the whitespace off of th' avatar?

[Gligarman2]

Photoshop, I guess.

[Dark Elf Bard]

If you have some time, would you do mine, pleasepleaseplease?

I'll give you signature credit!

[Gligarman2]

Sure. Can I have a pic?

[Dark Elf Bard]

Thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!



http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m8...i394o1_250.png

[Gligarman2]

Here's the avatar: http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/439...lfbardcopy.jpg

[Dark Elf Bard]

It still seems to have a white background...

[Gligarman2]

What? I removed the background. I used a Background Eraser, for celestia-sakes! What is this? Why?