Pathfinder Grab Bag Competition Chat Thread II: New Thread smell included!

[dragonjek]

Primaries
Drizzt Clone
Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age
Cthubrew F'tagn
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze


Secondaries
Not Your Grandad's Elements
Because I Love You
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space
I Love the Monster

[Stake A Vamp]

Primaries
Not Your Grandad's Elements
I love the monster
Cthubrew F'tagn
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze


Secondaries
pyrric procidure
rhyme and punishment
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space
drizzt clone

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes primary	Votes total
I, Construct	Constructs	2	3
Pyrrhic Procedure	Victory and success at great cost	1	4
A Shadow in the Night	Sneaking, subterfuge, and stealth	1	3
Darwinian Discoveries	New creature types and subtypes	1	3
Cthubrew F'tagn	Lovecraft Mythos	2	3
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	3	4
Because I Love You	Love, in all its different forms	1	2
A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone	Explosives	3	4
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze	Oozes	3	5
Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age	History and the past	2	4
Nothing Left for Me to Do but Dance	Dance	1	3
Rhyme and Punishment	Puns and wordplay	0	2
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	2	5
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	2	5
Drizzt Clone	Resurrecting and salvaging cliche'd character archetypes	3	4
Sensational	Loss or gain of senses	1	2

[Phillammon]

I, Construct
Sensational
A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone
A Shadow in the Night

Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space
Because I Love You
I Love the Monster
Drizzt Clone

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes
I, Construct	Constructs	1
A Shadow in the Night	Sneaking, subterfuge, and stealth	1
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	0
A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone	Explosives	1
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze	Oozes	0
Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age	History and the past	0
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	1
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	0
Drizzt Clone	Resurrecting and salvaging cliche'd character archetypes	0

Top 9 tallied. Pick just 4, no more primary/secondary votes.
We'll take the top 4 and do our final vote for next round's theme.

[The Witch-King]

A Shadow in the Night
A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone
I Love the Monster
Drizzt Clone

[dragonjek]

Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age
Drizzt Clone
I Love the Monster
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze

[malonkey1]

• Not Your Grandad's Elements
• Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age
• Drizz't Clone
• I, Construct

I have some pretty good ideas for each of these.

[Stake A Vamp]

Not Your Grandad's Elements
I love the monster
Phenominal Cosmic Power, Itty-Bitty Living Space
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes
I, Construct	Constructs	2
A Shadow in the Night	Sneaking, subterfuge, and stealth	2
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	2
A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone	Explosives	2
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze	Oozes	2
Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age	History and the past	2
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	2
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	3
Drizzt Clone	Resurrecting and salvaging cliche'd character archetypes	3

Drizzt and Monster Lovin' are taking the lead, but barely.

[ShiningStarling]

Not your Grandad's Elements
A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone
Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space

[Ilorin Lorati]

• Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space
• Not your Grandad's Elements
• I, Construct
• Drizzt Clone

[dragonjek]

Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze
I, Construct
Not your Grandad's Elements

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes
I, Construct	Constructs	4
A Shadow in the Night	Sneaking, subterfuge, and stealth	2
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	5
A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone	Explosives	3
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze	Oozes	3
Elegant Homebrew for a More Civilized Age	History and the past	4
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	4
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	3
Drizzt Clone	Resurrecting and salvaging cliche'd character archetypes	4

[3WhiteFox3]

Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space
Nothing Can Stop the Smooze
I love the monster
A Shadow In The Night

[MooseBite]

-I, Construct
-A Whiff o' the Ol' Brimstone
-Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space
-I Love the Monster

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes
I, Construct	Constructs	1
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	0
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	0
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	0

Final round of voting. Pick 1, and the most votes takes it.
We had 10 people vote in the last round.
Also, since we're almost done here, anyone with anything else to add to their PaGaP entry should get busy.

[dragonjek]

I Love the Monster

[malonkey1]

Not Your Granddad's Elements

[ShiningStarling]

Not Your Grandad's Elements

[Phillammon]

I, Construct

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes
I, Construct	Constructs	2
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	2
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	0
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	1

[MooseBite]

I, Construct

[The Witch-King]

I, Construct

[Ilorin Lorati]

There's only one thing I could truly vote for.

• PHENOMENAL COSMIC POWERS,^{Itty bitty living space.}

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes
I, Construct	Constructs	4
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	2
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	1
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	1

Looking like Constructs are in the lead. I'll end it tomorrow if there's not a tie.

[Stake A Vamp]

not your grandads elements

[Phillammon]

FINALLY finished the Priest of the Seven, for real this time, and just in the nick of time, at that. Sorry that it took this long. Could I ask someone to take a quick glance over it, just in case I can fit in some last minute tweaks? I'm aware that there are likely to be considerable balance issues involved, but I can't spot any in particular- someone pointing out some of the more glaring issues would be great.

(Fun fact, by the way. There are the same total number of Blessings for PotS as there are Glyphs for the Biblios, at 42 each.)

[dragonjek]

(Fun fact, by the way. There are the same total number of Blessings for PotS as there are Glyphs for the Biblios, at 42 each.)

I like this.

[gr8artist]

Proposed name	Theme	Votes
I, Construct	Constructs	4
Not your Grandad's Elements	Chemical elements from the periodical table	3
Phenomenal Cosmic Powers, Itty Bitty Living Space	Genies, Great power with heavy restraints	1
I Love the Monster	Appreciation for undervalued and unpopular monsters	1

Looks like Constructs take it.

Regarding the Priest of the Seven

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I love the flavor you give, especially the last line, comparing deities to pantheons. Really sets the mood.
The only problem is that just a few lines lower, we see the "must worship one of the seven" in your prereq's... Uh, what?
You have 3 dead levels in a 10-level 5/10 casting PrC. This makes me sad.
You have no explanation for what happens if I enter the class without the feats that the Patrons require. Consider adding those 7 feats to your class' prerequisites, and saying that he must have at least one or two of them.
some of your feat requirements seem... weird. Endurance on Wrath is strange to me, even considering the focus aspect you're going for. Consider combat expertise, improved initiative, weapon focus, or point-blank-shot instead.
Double check the phrasing for sloth's resting ability... "additionally, additionally" implies that the immunity is gained at the same time as the healing.
You seem to flip-flop between using the proper names and the sin shorthand. For example, your blessings are categorized by sin, but their associations are by name, so we have to check back and forth to know which sins/patrons work together in which ways.
Can you gild natural weapons *cough* teeth *cough*
I would add some patron-neutral blessings to the list, to work with that idea of "champion of the pantheon as a whole" thing that's so awesome about your entry.
Hell's jaws... range?
Playing with your food doesn't seem to work. If you spend an action doing something other than grappling... then are you still grappling? Do you need a check?
Blood ties... action is free? Swift? how often? does it work with U&D?
Hands of Midas is so staggeringly overpowered it's ridiculous. Not to mention the fact that it works on undead, like ghosts, which just makes my head hurt.
Equivalent Exchange is really fun... but the frequency is needlessly complicated, and it's way too powerful when paired with the default (and even pointed out) HoM ability. 2 turns, petrified and then exploded. You can never be fixed, and i don't know if the coins count as body parts for resurrection spells. It's fun, but a little OP.

I wish I had time to go farther, but the missus is calling.