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2015-06-05, 08:32 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Seconded, protagonist syndrome does not mean it works for everyone.
Plus, breaking a non-bankai is crippling, at least for a while.
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2015-06-05, 09:05 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Admittedly, Asauchi should be more fragile than named Zanpakutou, but what happens when he inevitably grows in power?
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I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-05, 09:50 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
I concur with Frozen_Feet; breaking an Asauchi is very close to literally meaningless. And everything above that necessarily goes on a case-by-case basis, since Shikai and Bankai durability is proportionate to the power of the user.
Truly awesome Ark Tamaeus avatar by Bryn. Full size version here.
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2015-06-05, 11:17 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Yes, his Shikai is supposed to be based off Iaijutsu/Iaido.
Once I manage to work my sheet out, I will see who is available for an introductory scene.
Alright, I'll try to go through all of these things. The submission was written over a few work breaks, so I am not surprised there are issues.
The storage is for him only, good catch though. That could be really over powered if people could add to it.
What happens to the stored Reiatsu when his blade is resealed?
Being able to cut Asauchi is... kind of really, REALLY strong for an unseated. Being able to cut Zanpakutou at all to start with, Asauchi or no, is something to be quite wary of.
Thirty minutes is an awful long amount of time when it comes to a battle ability. From how it's described, it feels as though the blades themselves remain after Tatara is resealed.
It's worth noting that in the last fifty years in-game, all Menos disappeared (few people know why), and Hollows wandering into Soul Society proper (in groups, no less) is pretty much unheard of. It wouldn't happen at random. Neither would a patrol of Shinigami. It's not impossible for them to have infiltrated, but... they'd need a REALLY good reason to do it besides "oh look, lunch I sensed from across dimensions".
Why was L'Algherri an exile, and for that matter, how come he wasn't hunted down like a rabid dog? The man knew how to forge Asauchi. That's essentially a military state secret, there should be a whole squad of Internal Security whose only job was to come after this guy until they found him, foregoing food, sleep and going to the bathroom until they did.
I like the concept, but it needs work.
Here is a list of things with the history I plan to change:
-Changing L'Agherri from exile to 'retired' elderly Shinigami who was a member of the Seireitei R&D division, who is allowed to continue his personal work as long as a squad of Internal Security members are ready to swoop down to silence him if he attempts to escape.
-L'Algherri's goal is to find an alternative way to craft Asauchi, in case any thing happened to the Royal Guard.
-Torryn bonded with the Asauchi when it was forged. And was instructed by L'Algherri to go receive instruction at the Seireitei. Remove hollow attack entirely.
I appreciate the feedback.
What else do I need to change?Last edited by AgentIndy; 2015-06-05 at 11:24 AM.
"1427. It is not a race to 0 SAN."
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2015-06-05, 02:10 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Yeah, I sometimes catch myself picturing how to break my own powersets, so.
Actually, being able to cut steel is probably fine. Most swords in Bleach are of the Impossibly Sharp variety anyway.
So if the Reishi returns to the sheath, how much does he lose between sword dissipation and energy return? Is there a loss in the process, and if so, how big or small is it? I can see him getting tired from a drawn-out battle that way, or actually being more suited for longer battles because he loses very little power with each attack.
One would have to wonder why he retired and continued working. But I can see this deal being acceptable. Basically, the guy's a person of interest to Seireitei ranks. He'd probably need permission from Seireitei to teach Torryn at all; can't have just anybody becoming one without Academy intervention. In which case, it would probably be best if Torryn got sent to the Academy, and then he came back to learn under L'Algherri, at which point he could bond with the Asauchi he himself forged.Last edited by Kuroimaken; 2015-06-05 at 08:15 PM.
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AWSUM
This one's new.Spoiler
I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-05, 07:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
I see the Sword Forging ability as an endurance ability, reliant on standard swordplay and wearing the opponent down.
I altered Torryn's sheet on the previous page, and I am switching him over to the Engineering Corps as Unseated due to the altered history I wrote up. A look over that would be appreciated. I am looking forward to playing in this though, it has been a while since I have gotten to play in a forum role play."1427. It is not a race to 0 SAN."
From Things Mr Welch is not Allowed to Do In an RPG
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2015-06-05, 08:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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Looks better now, though you're still spelling "Reiastu" in a couple of places here and there.
I take it his skill levels are relative to his status as an unseated?
I could be mistaken, because I often forget what Engineering DOES exactly, but wouldn't a researching Zanpakutou blacksmith be a better fit for the SSI? Engineering is a lot about SCIENCE!, after all.
Anyone else wanna weigh in so I don't look like the bad guy here? XDThe Void, the Cold Steel, the Just Sword courtesy of Prime32.
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I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-05, 08:51 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Oh man, now that's just embarrassing. I'll fix those.
In regards to skills:Pretty much, except for maybe his ability to manipulate reiatsu and reishi, though those are more skills that apply to his black smithing.
I was thinking about that. He could fall on either side of the spectrum. I'm personally willing to fill any position, and either place Torryn ends up in, I could see collaboration with the other department happening.
I really do appreciate the advice, you're not being that harsh.
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I've altered the sheet for Torryn so that he is in the SSI.Last edited by AgentIndy; 2015-06-06 at 02:52 PM.
"1427. It is not a race to 0 SAN."
From Things Mr Welch is not Allowed to Do In an RPG
Haviar the Broken Wyrd
Ixth From The Void
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2015-06-10, 02:22 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Question:
Are people waiting for me, or am I waiting for people? I lost track.Favorite sports:
Fencing
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(and basically everything else that starts with 'f')ALSO! Come roleplay FFRPG in the Nexus!Nexus Characters.
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2015-06-10, 07:15 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
I'm waiting for anyone.
"1427. It is not a race to 0 SAN."
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2015-06-10, 01:58 PM (ISO 8601)
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2015-06-10, 10:13 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Anyone else have feedback for my character sheet? And would anyone be available for an opening scene?
"1427. It is not a race to 0 SAN."
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2015-06-11, 11:10 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'd offer my Shini, but he's in big trouble, and I /still/ haven't gotten around to figuring out just how severe it is and if he can buffalo though any of it.
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2015-06-11, 04:08 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
Given that it's sorta Command's job to assign punishment ... What kinda trouble did your character get into?
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AWSUM
This one's new.Spoiler
I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-11, 07:25 PM (ISO 8601)
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He was the guy who let the Awakened Sin Rostro in.
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2015-06-12, 04:36 PM (ISO 8601)
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"It's the fate of all things under the sky,
to grow old and wither and die."
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2015-06-12, 05:13 PM (ISO 8601)
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"1427. It is not a race to 0 SAN."
From Things Mr Welch is not Allowed to Do In an RPG
Haviar the Broken Wyrd
Ixth From The Void
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2015-06-15, 02:52 PM (ISO 8601)
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FINALLY back from the limbo of not having ready access to a PC.
What'd I miss?The Void, the Cold Steel, the Just Sword courtesy of Prime32.
AWSUM
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I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-15, 03:49 PM (ISO 8601)
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Well, I answered your question for one.
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2015-06-15, 04:17 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
The Void, the Cold Steel, the Just Sword courtesy of Prime32.
AWSUM
This one's new.Spoiler
I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-15, 04:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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...I don't know anymore. Never-mind, that train of thought was parked so long doesn't make sense anymore.
Maybe I'll have him check in on them (in both the singular and plural) when I get around to it.
EDIT: A whole fortnight where nothing happened, strange...
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2015-06-20, 12:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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Mahonri Violist, in case you missed it, the Nachfolger are rejuvenating and about to cause trouble to Valentina.
"It's the fate of all things under the sky,
to grow old and wither and die."
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2015-06-20, 12:04 PM (ISO 8601)
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Am I the only one picturing Koutarou going to Las Noches to deliver the Central 46 reprimand to Jehoel and going "HOLY CRAP ON A STICK, WHAT IS GOING ON HERE?!"... and then advising the Quincy to stand down before he nukes them?
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AWSUM
This one's new.Spoiler
I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-20, 01:59 PM (ISO 8601)
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Perforce that would require nuking good bit of the Armada, including Kyoki, Turiel and Quidel. No-one would believe Koutarou has the balls to do it.
"It's the fate of all things under the sky,
to grow old and wither and die."
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2015-06-20, 02:29 PM (ISO 8601)
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That's what warning shots are for.
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AWSUM
This one's new.Spoiler
I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-23, 06:02 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: [BitPRē] OOCVI: We have a space base now!
So. Basic shell. Abilities to come after knowing if they work otherwise?
J. Hart, The Ashen Forest
SpoilerAge: Perhaps two hundred. The memories start (or stop?) there, at least, though those who know more would suspect older from where they were kept.
Gender: ???
Height: Four feet exactly
Weight: Seventy-one pounds
Association: Their own dark heart.
Aspect of Death: Inevitability
Mask Fragment: Vine-like white tendrils across their chest.
Hollow hole: A two inch wide void through their heart that each vine points to.
Reiatsu: Creeping roots and falling leaves of grey energy that cause paranoia.
Description:
SpoilerHart is physically unimposing; tiny, and slender even for their size, their skills are clearly not in fighting, despite the knife they carry on a slender belt of wooden panels, no matter their other clothing. Their eyes are milk white and clouded, with scarred lids, and their hair is a brittle, lank, curtain of silver reaching their feet.
As a Hollow, Hart resembled a stunted tree with roots in place of legs and a gnarled bark-like hide, their arms disproportionately thick branches ending in coiled vines. Their mask was a clinging overgrowth, and they were crowned by barren branch-antlers dripping moss.
Personality:
SpoilerA bitter shell who is above all looking for answers, Hart has no memories before escaping their abandoned prison that were not inside it - and they estimate that they were, judging only by those, trapped alone for two hundred years.
Still, despite amnesia and anger, Hart remains intelligent enough to blend in as best they can... For now. Perhaps dreams of a grey forest in blacks sands hold a clue to their past.
Edit: For reference... Anything goes for where/why Hart ws locked up. Maybe the First Hollow King saw them as a useful threat. Maybe they were an affiliate. Or they could just be some poor bastard thrown in a cage a long long time ago. Whatever works.Last edited by Lady Serpentine; 2015-06-29 at 03:35 AM.
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2015-06-29, 02:56 AM (ISO 8601)
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Guess who's back?
Hey guys, guess what?! I finally managed to get a new laptop. Yes AnimeKid is back and this time he is here to stay baby! Plus I see we got some newcomers. Nice to meet you all.
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2015-06-29, 07:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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Sorry for taking so long to respond, folks. Finals were a total female dog...
Hey C'nor, welcome. Not sure I understand your concept... Is Hart basically an amnesiac tree Hollow?
Hey, Animekid. Glad to see you around. Not much action going on at this point, I think this whole month has been running us ragged.The Void, the Cold Steel, the Just Sword courtesy of Prime32.
AWSUM
This one's new.Spoiler
I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."
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2015-06-29, 09:25 AM (ISO 8601)
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Amnesic tree Arrancar, yep.
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2015-06-29, 09:36 AM (ISO 8601)
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That'd be... a first. Not that it bothers me, I'm just curious how it'll turn out.
The Void, the Cold Steel, the Just Sword courtesy of Prime32.
AWSUM
This one's new.Spoiler
I met a girl with a really pensive look. I walk up to her, put a fifty cent coin in her hand, "For your thoughts. I know the going rate is supposed to be one, but I figure you play hardball."
She gave it back, "Keep it. Pretty sure a guy with your charm can find a way to have them for free anyway."