Hi eveyone, I'm working on building a world and a story for my friends and I'd like some criticism and thoughts on what I have so far. I have linked the three documents that contain what I have done so far. Any input that you have to offer would be very helpful.

Races and Gods:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...?usp=drive_web


Societies:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...?usp=drive_web


The Story:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...?usp=drive_web