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2019-12-30, 01:33 PM (ISO 8601)
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Thanks for the feedback.
Point taken on level 3 offering nothing for combat. I'll give some thought into what might be appropriate. I'm thinking something that will add some flexibility to Inspiration use without actually adding much power, maybe something there Bardic Inspiration can be expended as a reaction on another creature's behalf. So if you inspire the Wizard but it's the Fighter that turns out to have a better use for it, the Wizard can use a reaction to pass the inspiration to the Fighter. Fits the theme of fellowship and group-bonding while not relying on the followers.
As for the followers joining to become a mob, I'm walking a bit of a line there. 90% of the time I expect the mob will coalesce right as initiative is rolled and it won't be an issue, and another 9% of the time when there's a straggler or two their first and only turn will consist of nothing but "and these guys move 60 feet and are now a part of the mob" and it won't be an issue, because really how often would they be more than 90 feet away from each other when combat begins? I expect that it would only be under very unusual situations where a follower will spend more than one turn apart from the mob, and I think in most of those scenarios it would be because the follower has been sent far enough away that you won't need to worry about it at all. And the alternative is things like followers teleporting from 50 miles away (where you've sent them to run back to town and buy provisions or something), or phasing through jail cells to form up. Neither is inherently bad, magic is magic after all, but as a passive feature that uses no spell slots or anything of the sort, it seems like those effects would bend the credibility of what sorts of things magic should be able to accomplish.
As for the followers/mob being the subclasses' only feature, you aren't wrong about that, but in general bard subclasses have rather mild features, because the bard chassis is so solid. So there's just not a whole lot of room to work with without taking things further above the power curve than I'm comfortable with. I'll work on the additional 3rd level ability, hopefully it should alleviate some of those concerns.
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2019-12-30, 04:57 PM (ISO 8601)
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Since it’s added to the damage roll, it would do the same damage type as the attack. Since it’s the result and not the die itself being added/subtracted, it’s also not doubled by a crit.
Yes. I’ll change the wording to make that clear
It’s intended to be at-will like the Light Cleric’s aura. I might change it to make a it a bit more of a tradeoff.Last edited by AdAstra; 2019-12-30 at 05:07 PM.
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2020-01-05, 05:32 AM (ISO 8601)
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Added the following ability to the College of Fellowship:
Strength in Numbers
Also at third level, you inspire unity among your comrades in arms. A creature that has a Bardic Inspiration die from you can roll that die when it takes damage: instead of that creature taking the damage alone, the damage is divided between that creature and a number of other willing creatures within 30 feet of it, which cannot exceed the number rolled on the Bardic Inspiration die. The damage is divided as that creature wishes, but must be divided as evenly as possible.
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2020-01-05, 10:11 AM (ISO 8601)
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Spoiler: 5e Subclass Contest Wins
● IV-Pinball Wizard
● VI-Luchador Bard
● XIII-Rogue, Tavern Wench
● XV-Monk, Way of the Shrine Guardian
● XVI-Cleric, Madness Domain
● XVIII-Fighter, Chef
● XXI-Artificer, Battling Bowman
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2020-01-05, 07:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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2020-01-08, 11:54 PM (ISO 8601)
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Not as detailed as I'd like to do, but some small feedback for everyone here.
Spoiler: Revelry Domain
Why does Center of Attention give advantage on Constitution saving throws? The damage resistance I can see, but Con saves feel out of place.
Heart of an Oxen: Most resistance features just give resistance, even if you already have resistance to that thing.
Life of the Party: I don't have a good point of comparison for this, but it seems too strong. If there's a Warlock around, the cleric can easily trade one 6th level slot out for 4 5th level slots.
Spoiler: Spirits Domain
Drunkard's Luck (Defensive version) is fine, but I think the damage output is a little too high for the offensive usage.
Miraculous Proof seems like it should be on its own use limitation rather than the Channel Divinity limitation; Channel Divinity usually has direct combat application in some manner. If you switch Drunkard's Luck to a Channel Divinity feature and Miraculous Proof to its own I think it would work better.
Inebriation is an odd effect. Definitely like it though. Same with Spirit Haze
Spoiler: Path to Valhalla
Just all around like this. Only concern is that All-Father's Blessing references Sacred Mead but seems to have nothing to do with it.
Spoiler: College of Fellowship
Do non-mob commoners still have HP? Can they be killed in battle? Other than that, it's a well-done class. The mob rules are solid and it looks fun.
Spoiler: Sommelier
I'll be honest I don't have the book with Artificer yet so my only point of reference is the old playtest rules
Inebriated Confidant seems fun.
Sickening Blow feels like it should have a usage limitation. Do Artificers normally get a bonus action damage feature?
Nauseating Strike continues to build Sickening Blow. That seems like a lot of damage and riders for one bonus action.
Spoiler: Tavern Wench
Bar brawling isn't always about the patrons, eh?
Each of the features here seems to build on a theme without actually being mechanically related to one another, which is pretty cool. It gives the rogue a lot of options in combat, where they normally lack variety. Good job.
Spoiler: Way of the Iron Cask
Is Acrid Furnace both a passive and active feature? As in you can always eat anything, but you can only rapidly consume something a number of times per long rest?
Synthesize temp HP does not last long enough to be worth it IMO. The foci are also a little complicated (I like complicated, but it's not necessarily a common opinion).
Bring Me More is odd. Why not a short rest, since they normally replenish on a long? I also don't really see it as a combat feature unlike Ki or Bardic Inspiration so initiative is doubly odd as a trigger.
Spoiler: Circle of the Great Feast
Why not give both brewing tools and musical instrument at 2? Those are relatively minor proficiencies.
Drunken Gait is cool.
Brewmaster only has two effects but they seem fine.
Wild shape is the name of the transformation druid feature, not beast shape. Also, unless otherwise specified, class features are retained in animal form by default (Drunken Gait's benefits should already apply to animal shapes).
Free Spirited: Supernatural abilities are not a thing anylonger in 5e. The wording would be "cast [spell] without consuming a spell slot or requiring material or somatic components" or something to that effect.
Spoiler: Oath of the Boor
Turn the Civilized needs a duration. Also...gross (but thematic).
Aura of Disgust should allow them to ignore the effect by some means (disadvantage attacking other people, lowered damage against other people, something to that effect).
Inured to Death is a good capstone, but its wording could be cleaned up a bit.
I'll also be making some last minute adjustments to College of the Wassailer later this week or possibly this weekend just before deadline.Last edited by MoleMage; 2020-01-08 at 11:55 PM.
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2020-01-11, 01:25 AM (ISO 8601)
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They do, they have 4 HP (and 10 AC) like any commoner, and they can die, though the fact that they just run and hide means I expect most DMs will ignore them. Before they can form a mob they're a purely out-of-combat resource, great for the social/exploration pillars simply because manpower can be so useful, but there's not a good reason an enemy with any sort of tactical intelligence would spend its time trying to pick off the guys running away when there are real credible threats on the battlefield.
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Yes, it's both. The active is there so that you can refill your Tank with an action while in combat (which is also why Bring Me More works that way). At the eleventh hour, I'm making the proper edits. Synthesize no longer had a blink-and-you'll-miss-it duration, and is stronger. With Viscous, it's like you hit someone hard with Iron Bands of Bilarro. They fly through the air with a gob of goo on them, then splat. Hard Synthesize now no longer makes you immune, instead grants DR. Hard Vomit now can critically strike instead of gaining range. Volatile Synthesize now creates a recoil shockwave instead. Volatile and Poison Vomit effects now last longer, as do the effects of Slippery and Viscous Vomit.
Viscous Synthesize now grapples things that hit you (Sticky!).
I am sorry I could not give feedback this time . I will explain in my voting post.Last edited by Phhase; 2020-01-12 at 06:09 PM.
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2020-01-13, 11:54 AM (ISO 8601)
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Contest time is up, voting time is now!
http://www.giantitp.com/forums/showt...3#post24351363Currently operating the 5e Subclass Contest and the 5e Base Class Contest. Check them out if even just to vote or give feedback, we love that in there.
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2020-01-20, 06:21 PM (ISO 8601)
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We are halfway through the voting period, and only four votes from 10 entries have been submitted. One of the six left is myself, but that still leaves five more votes floating free!
As to our current leader, nickl_2000's Tavern Wench has taken a strong early lead, followed by Damon_Tor's College of Fellowship. With so many votes still hopefully to come, it's definitely still possible to go any direction, though!Currently operating the 5e Subclass Contest and the 5e Base Class Contest. Check them out if even just to vote or give feedback, we love that in there.
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2020-01-26, 07:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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Spoiler: 5e Subclass Contest Wins
● IV-Pinball Wizard
● VI-Luchador Bard
● XIII-Rogue, Tavern Wench
● XV-Monk, Way of the Shrine Guardian
● XVI-Cleric, Madness Domain
● XVIII-Fighter, Chef
● XXI-Artificer, Battling Bowman
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I've been having trouble connecting to the forums for the past few days and I'm guessing that's happening to people in general, so I'm going to extend voting an extra week in case anyone was trying but unable to look at the entries or cast a vote. New deadline is Feb 3.
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Spoiler: 5e Subclass Contest Wins
● IV-Pinball Wizard
● VI-Luchador Bard
● XIII-Rogue, Tavern Wench
● XV-Monk, Way of the Shrine Guardian
● XVI-Cleric, Madness Domain
● XVIII-Fighter, Chef
● XXI-Artificer, Battling Bowman
● XXV-Ley Line Sorcerer
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Spoiler: 5e Subclass Contest Wins
● IV-Pinball Wizard
● VI-Luchador Bard
● XIII-Rogue, Tavern Wench
● XV-Monk, Way of the Shrine Guardian
● XVI-Cleric, Madness Domain
● XVIII-Fighter, Chef
● XXI-Artificer, Battling Bowman
● XXV-Ley Line Sorcerer
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2020-02-22, 02:07 PM (ISO 8601)
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Woo we are back online! I am extending voting until the end of the day March 1st, in part because we lost access during the last extension, in part because I need to recollect my bearings, and in part because I won't have access to a proper computer for another three days and I always try to end these things on a Sunday.
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Remind me again, are we allowed to post a homebrew we've already created that fits the contest?
It seems the next contest is going to be one where you make a choice between two features, and I have one that'd fit perfectly, but I want to make sure it's within the rules to do so.
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Prestige Options, changing primary attributes to open a world of new multiclassing.
Adrenaline Surge, fitting Short Rests into combat to fix bosses/Short Rest Classes.
Pain, using Exhaustion to make tactical martial combatants.
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2020-03-03, 01:52 PM (ISO 8601)
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And we're ready to get the next contest up! Keep your eyes open for Contest XIV: Make a Choice!
And it's up here: https://forums.giantitp.com/showthre...1#post24383141Last edited by MoleMage; 2020-03-03 at 02:03 PM.
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2020-03-06, 02:44 AM (ISO 8601)
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Well I think I've got my Vestige Warlock solidly in "alpha" release. It's a sort of "build your own patron" system where you get to glue together three different not-quite-so-powerful mini-patrons and hopefully come up with something greater than the sum of their parts. It's more of a "caster" than other warlocks in that it doesn't have much in the way of defensive features, but instead his features are nearly exclusively short-rest limited powers which augment spells he casts, a sort of souped-up metamagic.
The vestiges' powers are deliberately made to be usable together in combination. Decisively win a Counterspell vs Counterspell battle with The Paradox so you can steal the BBEG's self-buff spell with The Lost then pass it on to an ally with The Regent or you can Dial an AoE damage spell up to 11 with The Void, The Ascendant and the Guardian.
I broke from tradition by not giving the vestiges names from the Lore: both the 3.5 Binder and the 4e Vestige Pact Warlock named each vestige, and I didn't really care for it. My preference was to name them after various mythic archetypes and make them totally setting-neutral.Last edited by Damon_Tor; 2020-03-06 at 02:52 AM.
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2020-03-06, 01:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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My entry is up. Sorcerous Origin: Fateweaver.
I’m in the process of reading The Wheel of Time for the first time, so I’ve been getting a steady diet of Ta’veren and the Pattern. This subclass is partially inspired by that series, as well as the Quantal and Marjal from Mark Lawerence’s Book of the Ancestor series. And also partially inspired by the three Fates of Greek mythology.
I'm happy with it overall, but I think it needs work/fine tuning. I find that I'm having a harder time gauging balance since the release of the Class Feature Variants UA. The added versatility definitely skews balance, but I'm not sure I've fully grasped the new "meta" for creating subclasses. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Well I have to say that Sub14 is off to a great start. You are all coming up with very interesting ideas. I have nothing at this point, and might end up sitting out this contest, but it looks to be a good one.
Good luck, and congrats to the winners of Sub13.Skill monkeys, away!
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Spoiler: 5e Subclass Contest Wins
● IV-Pinball Wizard
● VI-Luchador Bard
● XIII-Rogue, Tavern Wench
● XV-Monk, Way of the Shrine Guardian
● XVI-Cleric, Madness Domain
● XVIII-Fighter, Chef
● XXI-Artificer, Battling Bowman
● XXV-Ley Line Sorcerer
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Feedback:
Fighter Archetype: Olympian
I like this well enough. Would definitely allow it as a DM, but it's not super exciting. I do not know how to improve it. You gain all but one of the events by the time you complete this; are you looking for more suggestions for events to add? Also, it's a fighter. You can go wild and most people won't think it's overpowered. I'd say the shotput should require two hands (I never did it, but it looks that way) and should specify that you do or do not have proficiency for the attack. Discus needs a range as a whole new weapon, and why is it special? Special implies there's more rules to read to get what it does. Wrestling is by far my favorite for a character I would actually play. The jumping and running ones seem fine, if underwhelming. Decathlete is fine for the superhuman things that 18th level characters are supposed to do.
Warlock Patron: The Vestige
Looks like we had some pretty similar thoughts, I just did mine the lazy way. I like it. I suppose you're looking to expand the vestige list? It would be cool to have one for each skill, but maybe you don't want to hand them that much versatility, or just don't care to do it with the purely physical skills. Although, it's a warlock, so they can probably use all the utility they can get their hands on. So far, Athletics, Acrobatics, Handle Animal, Investigation, Peformance, Sleight of Hand, Stealth, and Survival are unrepresented.Spoiler: Suggested VestigesThe Avatar A god that befell disaster due to his desire to physically manifest and walk with mortals. Grants Athletics.
The Rider Basically Ghost Rider. Grants Animal Handling.
The Lorekeeper Similar to mages who ascended via magic, the lorekeeper rooted out some secrets that were not meant to be known. Grants Investigation.
The Crossroads Where mortals go to barter their souls for skill in song. Grants Performance.
The Thief How does one gain the powers of a god of thieves? One steals it. Grants Sleight of Hand.
The Castaway Physically stranded in a world of otherness, a mortal absorbed so much energy from an alien world, they reached vestige status. Grants Survival.
Can't really think of one for Acrobatics and Stealth (unless you want to roll them in with the same ideas as Athletics and Sleight of Hand).
Sorcerous Origin: Threadweaver
Love the tie-in to Greek mythology. I really don't have much to say, except the 18th level ability is weird and non-intuitive, though it remains thematic. Maybe tighten the wording? Not that it's long, it just would by necessity become a more elegant and easily understood feature if you managed to get the point across with fewer words. Sorry if that's not very helpful.My Homebrew (Free to use, don't even bother asking. PM me if you do, though; I'd love to hear stories).
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I've been thinking about it since the last contest went dormant during the great forum coma, and yeah, I didn't have a strong idea at first either. I felt like there were a ton of ways I could just insert choices into almost any subclass I could think of, but it always just felt like I was coming up with 3+ different subclasses that just mix and match features like the Totem Barbarian does. I wanted the choices to be more meaningful, and to interact with each other.
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2020-03-06, 06:58 PM (ISO 8601)
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I didn't want to have one for every possible skill; I didn't want to have too many options for vestiges for one thing: my focus was on social and knowledge skills, with a few scattered others where it made sense. Investigation is one I would like to see added though and I have a loose set of ideas for a vestige that will work with it, but it wasn't ready for the "alpha release".
EDIT: The Investigation Vestige is in, "The Question", an amalgamation of erased knowledge and history. Somewhat similar to The Lost, in that it's a communal intelligence born of disembodied thoughts, but while The Lost is bound together by misplaced magic, The Question is bound by the divine forbiddance of the powerful beings that sealed away the secrets.Last edited by Damon_Tor; 2020-03-06 at 08:06 PM.
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Thanks so much for the feedback!
I never thought of the champion as particularly exciting so I used this as a chance to make a similar “better than basic” fighter with more choices and widgets. As you level you mostly just get better at basic actions but get a few more options and a lot more choice in how you improve.
The idea for the discus is still half baked. The special quality right now is a place holder but supposed to be related to its ability to get around cover.
Shot put is a one handed toss. Since the rules generally interfere with making multiple thrown attacks I thought the ability to throw a single small object for “Cantrip” damage was an approach to a fix, Like the scaling damage of the Javelin and the range of the hammer throw events bringing the thrown ranges up to par with smaller bows/crossbows.
I’ll go back in and add Proficiency bonus for clarity to some of the entries.
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Thanks for the feedback. You're right, the phrasing isn't quite clear on that ability. I'll put some thought into reworking it.
Some quick feedback for the completed ones:
Spoiler: Fighter Subclass: The OlympianI like it. It adds some fun new toys for a Fighter. I think it needs a ribbon ability or two. All the subclasses that offer a choice from an existing ability at higher levels still have other, weaker abilities at those levels. So something for skills or non-combat for 7th, 10th, and 15th would make this subclass shine.
Spoiler: Otherwordly Patron: the VestigeA lot to unpack here. Overall I like it. Some of those Vestige powers look fun as heck. There's probably some power-level variations between the Vestiges, but nothing that stood out as egregious. I normally don't love to add a tertiary stat onto a subclass, but you've reduced the MADness some by including the static +1, +2, +3
Spoiler: Warlock Patron: The IFCCI love the corporate-devil theme. I like the choice from any spell list. I think the level 6 ability is a bit on the weak-side/boring-side and the immunity at level 10 is a little on the strong-side. It evens out, but there are definitely some power-spikes and power-lulls there. Levels 6 to 10 might feel like a drag. Soul Splice is a good idea for fixing Mystic Arcanum, but I think the wording could be cleaned up a bit. Much like my capstone, your capstone could use a rewrite to get it simpler and more clear.Spoiler: Homebrew Subclasses by RickAsWrittenRoguish Archetype – Bladecloak - 1st Place, Subclass Contest X
Martial Archetype – Irradiated - 1st Place, Subclass Contest XI
Warlock Otherworldly Patron – The Nilbog - 1st Place, Subclass Contest XII
Barbarian - Path of the Bureaucrat
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You could do something like a Monk I made a while back:
https://forums.giantitp.com/showthre...mal-form-Monk)
I'd use it, but since it's shared somewhere outside of the contest, but inside the forum, it'd be against the contest rules.
The idea is that you're still creating 3 different specific choices, but key elements to the overall subclass makes your choice relevant and ties in the concept of the subclass, as opposed to the powers of the choices tying to each other.
For example, mine used a special attack action to utilize a special mechanic of your choice, but the special mechanics are all isolated from one another. It'd be akin to saying that a Totem Barbarian can only choose a single animal for all of its choices, but it can change its choice every time it casts its Speak with Beasts ritual. Or that the Four Elements Monk can only choose a single element for all of its choices, but the first Ki point he spends each turn is refunded.
This is enough to make the subclass have a feeling (A barbarian that converses with animal spirits, a Monk that utilizes the endless energies around him, a Monk that uses the savagery of beasts) without having to create a convoluted balancing act of micromanaging how every combination is going to impact one another (akin to the Totem Barbarian).
The other problem with having something be hyper-customizable, like the Totem Barbarian, is that certain combinations feel almost required. Bear Totem #1 works best with Bear Totem #3. This may be intentional, but it gives the illusion of choice. Players will almost always choose that which is best for a concept, and that concept is already pre-defined by your level 3 feature. There's not much of a reason that players would choose a different concept later on, so removing that choice (as I did with my homebrew subclass) doesn't feel like a loss (you don't prioritize mobility if you went Bear Totem on your first choice).
As a result, I had the luxury of working with 3 isolated systems as opposed to 3 interlocking ones.Last edited by Man_Over_Game; 2020-03-09 at 01:12 PM.
5th Edition Homebrewery
Prestige Options, changing primary attributes to open a world of new multiclassing.
Adrenaline Surge, fitting Short Rests into combat to fix bosses/Short Rest Classes.
Pain, using Exhaustion to make tactical martial combatants.
Fate Sorcery, lucky winner of the 5e D&D Subclass Contest VII!
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There are vestiges that are generally useful, vestiges that are situationally useful, and vestiges that are designed to drive combos.
The Ascendant is probably the most generally useful, but it also carries with it the least combo potential. Any damage-focused build will want The Void and control-focused build will want The Prisoner, and The Guardian is a great way to get more mileage out of either playstyle when dealing with a wide battlefield. These I consider "core vestiges" and I would expect most binders would take at least one.
The Lost is very useful when facing spellcasters, or if you and/or your party gets their concentration broken a lot. The Question is indispensable when fighting things you can't see. The Indebted is important to keep in your back pocket if someone in your party dies. These are situational vestiges: very useful to have in your "vestiges known" but not something you would automatically bind every day.
The Shadow and The Abdicant have interesting uses on their own (Feign Death becomes a powerful control spell, Warding Bond becomes much more useful when you can cast it through the barbarian) but they work best in combination (For example turning Warding Bond into a way to reflect damage onto an enemy). Similarly, the Paradox is useful enough by itself just to reroll a spell from the ground up every once in a while the dice don't go your way, but its more important use is when used together with other vestiges, like using its properties during downtime to inoculate your party against void damage (noted in the Q&A). These are the vestiges for guys like me that thrive on complex systems and flipping switches and seeing what weird things they can make happen, but I expect most others won't care for them.
But that's the beautiful thing about this theme, right? Choices.Last edited by Damon_Tor; 2020-03-09 at 04:25 PM.
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Re: D&D 5e Subclass Contest Chat Thread
I keep wanting to make a Fey based sorcerer class. It's been sitting in my ideas pile for over a year now, but I just can't get it to work. However, this one jumped out at me more.
Second draft of Paladin, Oath of the Planar Warrior is completed and ready for functional review. This is a subclass based on channeling the power of the planes through themselves to do different things.
Please feel free to rip it apart and give your opinions :)
My own reviews of completed subclasses will be coming in the next few daysLast edited by nickl_2000; 2020-03-10 at 01:09 PM.
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5e Homebrew Subclass Creation Guide - PEACH | Extended Homebrew Post
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Spoiler: 5e Subclass Contest Wins
● IV-Pinball Wizard
● VI-Luchador Bard
● XIII-Rogue, Tavern Wench
● XV-Monk, Way of the Shrine Guardian
● XVI-Cleric, Madness Domain
● XVIII-Fighter, Chef
● XXI-Artificer, Battling Bowman
● XXV-Ley Line Sorcerer