Elf and Dwarf

[falconire]

I've recently relaunched this comic, being a comedic sword and sorcery strip. I'd appreciate any comments and critiques.


http://www.drunkduck.com/Elfanddwarf/index.php?p=590884

[PhantomFox]

I see just about nothing changed from the last time you posted this, aside from three or so new strips. A couple of those are somewhat better, but unfortunately still nothing to write home about. Smile-worthy I guess. But I'd re-write the old strips, perhaps completely re-doing them since they haven't been improved at all.

Even so, all of the old problems remain. Flat jokes, slightly offensive humor/language, fantasy and roleplaying cliches, and a few copy/paste issues that I may be imagining.

Oh, and I almost forgot. Drunk Duck doesn't have a very... good reputation in terms of quality comics.