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2011-08-11, 01:19 AM (ISO 8601)
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Hmmmm Ive always wanted to go to Canada...
Gurren Lagann is more like, He-Man's battle cry. after every awesome moment i just wanted to yell "I HAVE THE POWERRRRRRRRRRRRRR!"
I mean the shows main "epic moment" song goes
Do the impossible, see invisible. Touch the untouchable, break the unbreakable.
Nothing here but us trees...
Aircraft carriers FTW.
and the cronosphere. Nothing is better then dropping the soviet fleet on their construction yard...
MY CHILDHOOD! GAHHHHHHHHH! Happiness.
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWADVENTURE!!!!!
My current story ponies-Ponylagann in the Ponythread.
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2011-08-11, 01:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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Hi pony thread.
Ishida strikes again
Bye pony thread.
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2011-08-11, 01:31 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 01:46 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 01:46 AM (ISO 8601)
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On that song:
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2011-08-11, 01:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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Wait... deadly hugs?
Phoekun is Marik from Yugioh the Abridged Series!
We'll be fine as long as we aren't named Steve.Last edited by darthbobcat; 2011-08-11 at 01:48 AM.
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2011-08-11, 01:56 AM (ISO 8601)
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Yeah, every time I hear that I just think of how over the top the show gets and how into it I can become.
Reminds me of this, in case any of you haven't seen it (note: spoilers for the ending for those ponies who haven't seen it).
Crap!
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2011-08-11, 02:09 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 02:10 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 02:19 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 02:42 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 02:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 02:43 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 03:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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Can any pony pull off leather pants (or pull them on, for that matter)? Maybe there's a reason nopony wears them, even when they put on clothes.
http://ponibooru.413chan.net/post/view/32124
With...one exception, that is.
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2011-08-11, 03:58 AM (ISO 8601)
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There's something oddly cute about this pic
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2011-08-11, 04:02 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 04:16 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 04:21 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 04:49 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 04:57 AM (ISO 8601)
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1.../edit?hl=en_US
The promised first completed draft of Semper Fidelis.
Aside from the normal concerns (is it good or does it suck, typos, is the ending satisfying), I have a few questions.
1) To reiterate the question from the other night, what Equestria Daily fanfic tags apply? Did I manage to cross the grimdark divide?
2) Should I divide this into smaller chapters for the sanity of the readers?
3) If so, where are logical places to divide it? Assume somewhere between 2 and 5, 5 being the absolute maximum.My anime review podcast is coming back after a one year hiatus! www.fivepointpodcast.com
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2011-08-11, 05:16 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 05:26 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'm starting to think that maybe, just maybe, the Pony threads have accelerated since the last time I had to slog through around 24 hours worth of posting. I'm exhausted, and you crazy foals will have more of the good stuff tomorrow, too. Man, what did I get myself into?!
I think I need a nap. Haha.
In Unrelated news, my cat is unsure of who I am addressing when I tell him he's now a pony. It's priceless, because he doesn't have enough guile to wonder if maybe, maybe, I'm teasing him.
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2011-08-11, 05:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 05:52 AM (ISO 8601)
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Ha, now that I actually read the whole thing in one sitting, I have to say this.
Awesome.
Some things that struck me:
Spoiler- Having Applejack endorse a lie at the end sounds a little ... wrong if you ask me. I would have her tell half-truths instead. Eg. Ah'm pretty sure Soarin' needs his rest. Or something.
- The Doctor? Hm. Seemed like a Deus Ex Machina right there. Not really of a fan of him... but okay. He seemed like comic relief more than anything else to be honest.
- Uh. I got nothing else.
As for the questions:
1) Doesn't seem to be grimdark to be honest. Nopony was actually killed, though you did depict injuries and some pretty disturbing transformations. I'll say [Dark][Adventure][Shipping] to go with it.
2) No chapters please. It makes reading the whole thing in one go easier. Plus it's completed anyway.Last edited by Grif; 2011-08-11 at 05:52 AM.
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2011-08-11, 06:05 AM (ISO 8601)
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It's based on this song from the movie Meatballs. Which explains the innuendos. Definately hot nights :P
I actually roleplay DT on another board. I decided that her parents are successful business ponies who are working in Manehatten and therefore only ever around in the "Oh hi honey, I'm off to work, here's some money, be nice to the babysitter, bye!" sense. So she's basically craving attention because she gets none from her family. She picks on blank flanks as a way of making herself feel more important.
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2011-08-11, 06:23 AM (ISO 8601)
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Going to agree with [Adventure][Shipping] not sure about [Dark] since I'm not quite sure what that means.
Unless if you know easy split points, splitting it seems unnecessary and like too much work.
Favorite line by far is "Girls, girls, please. You're both pretty!" by The Doctor. And on that note I'll leave people who haven't read it yet wondering how the hell it can be pertinent to this story.My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: The Thread, The Game, The Tumblr.
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2011-08-11, 06:28 AM (ISO 8601)
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I'll have to agree with Grif on this:
In terms of chapters, this thing is a beast, and needs to be broken up. At the very least, add page numbers to it. Not everyone can read, what was it, 60/70 pages? Not everyone can read that many pages in one go, so breaking it up into 10-20 paged intervals would probably be for the best. I'd have to reread it to see where is best (and I will at some point when I have a few hours of free time), but off the top of my head something like this:
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Section 1: up until Soarin gets knocked unconscious, directly before he first meets Apllejack
Section 2: Them being reunited, fight with Scorpan. End with everyone screaming and transforming back into their normal forms (might want the screaming to be the end and the transformation to be the beginning of the next part)
Part 3: Discussion with Scorpan up through first encounter with Tirek (where AJ gets transformed)
Part 4: Soarin chasing Tirek, breaking the clouds, and perhaps even up to the use of the Elements.
Part 5: The ending
Once I get around to reading it again, I'll probably have better breaking points.
I'll admit though, my mind works weird in that, if something would take me 30 minutes, I balk at it and avoid it, but if I see the same thing broken up into two 15 minute sections, I do it with gusto.
That's my two bits at least.
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2011-08-11, 07:18 AM (ISO 8601)
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I, Bobcat, have been patiently awaiting the completion (which is why I've not made any comment toward it up until now; would rather read your stuff in it's final, polished version to maximise my enjoyment); and I shall thus read and comment at some point (though, things are getting a bit hectic, so it might be a day or few before I can set aside the time to do so.)
I went with Тактического Операции Система Адъютант (Tactical Operations System Adjutant, as far as I can extrapolate from the two or three translators I ran it through). Which gives me TOSA ("toe-sa", not, as a fellow Brit might read, "tosser." Yes, I'm keeping that despite that, because tactical opertaions system adjutant sounds awesome.)
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2011-08-11, 07:22 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-08-11, 08:00 AM (ISO 8601)
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And it also doesn't make sense. Sorry. Nobody will notice, that's for sure, but these words don't form a phrase. Or, at least, you need to make "Tactical" female, to reflect the gender of "System". And "Operations", well, needs to connect to something. If I knew the logic of what you're trying to say... Depending of how you logically connect the English words.
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(Tactical <---(Operation <-- System) ) -named-> Adjutant
Тактическая операционная система "Адьютант"
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(System -of-> (Tactical <-- Operations)) -named-> Adjutant
Система Тактических Операций "Адьютант"
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System(atic) <-- (Adjutant -of-> (Tactical <-- Operations) )
Системный Адьютант Тактических Операций (sounds like gibberish in both languages IMO, but just as an example)
The problem is, just stacking nouns doesn't work here. In English it sounds ambiguous, but if any way to interconnect the words works, the whole phrase is OK. In Russian it's just word salad without any logic, so you need to know the unrderlying logical connections of the phrase (that exist in the English phrase, but are implied instead of reflected in writing) before translating. And you need to decide, is it in the end an Adjutant or a System? It can't be both, unless you want your plot be centered around the conflict of two facets. Then you've got artistic licence to name it whatever necessary for the plot.
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