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2010-09-01, 02:23 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2010
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- In my house. duh!
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The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Here is my first Webcomic on the origin of my avatar. This all started when Introbulus spontaneously PM's me with a short story, that is now the text in comic #1. Thank you!
Comic 1: (The Legend Begins)
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Comic 2 (The journey PT.1)
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Tell me how I'm doing, constructive critiscism is wholeheartedly approved of!
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2010-09-01, 03:41 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Nov 2008
- Location
- Texas
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Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Booby!
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2010-09-01, 03:55 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Sep 2010
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Uhm... if he tossed the book away, how could he peruse it later?
(yeah, I know, picky detail)
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2010-09-01, 03:57 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
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- Germany (North)
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Lots of tiny text in a swirly font. >_>
First thing i'd recommend is either scaling it up and/or changing to something less... well, swirly.
(Can't comment on the content due to, well, you know. Art seems decent, though.)
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2010-09-01, 06:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2010
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- Somewhere clever
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Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
really good art. storyline has caught me cuz, duh! Boobies. But I have one question, how is the art so good? Mine seems bad and I think its because i dont know how to shade...sooo how do I do that?
Just to clarify, I HATE my name, it just sounded cool in my head at the time okay?
You can just call me Kay or Kur. Easier than finding an umlaut code on the interwebz.
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2010-09-01, 07:18 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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- Starbase Janus
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2010-09-01, 07:24 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
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- Germany (North)
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
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2010-09-01, 08:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2010
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- In my house. duh!
- Gender
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2010-09-01, 10:18 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Jan 2009
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- In America!
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Shouldn't this be in Fancomics if it's not hosted off site?
Good first page though.
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2010-09-06, 04:18 PM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2010
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- The disc.
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Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Cool.......ninja stealth birds.
Circulating Versions of Mr. Crunchy
Spoilerby Emperor Ing by Telasi by Lord Mashus [IMG]http://wildwestscifi.net/Misc/Stabber_1_120x120.png[/IMG by Domochevsky]
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2010-09-06, 07:03 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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- Starbase Janus
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2010-09-06, 08:44 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2010
- Location
- In my house. duh!
- Gender
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
I'm not too sure If I will be able to get them out too frequently, but I'll try to get at least one soon.
EDIT:
Working on one that should be done today or tomorrow.
2nd EDIT:
Done! Check it out.
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2010-09-07, 04:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2010
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- Israel
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
where are the eyes of te shark-thing-dude?
Despite everything, its still me.
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2010-09-07, 05:01 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Feb 2009
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- Germany (North)
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Good question, that. (The next has a good size now. )
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2010-09-07, 10:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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- Starbase Janus
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2010-09-08, 05:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2010
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- In my house. duh!
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2010-09-09, 12:04 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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- Starbase Janus
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2010-09-11, 01:24 AM (ISO 8601)
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- May 2010
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- Somewhere clever
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Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
grammar nazi time! I think it's "burst" not bursted
Otherwise, doing well man!Last edited by Krüsher; 2010-09-11 at 01:24 AM.
Just to clarify, I HATE my name, it just sounded cool in my head at the time okay?
You can just call me Kay or Kur. Easier than finding an umlaut code on the interwebz.
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2010-09-11, 01:29 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Dec 2009
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- Somewhere in the Pacific
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Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
I don't like the new one quite as much as the first. It looks rather lazily done, almost copy-paste looking. Don't get me wrong, I do like everything else, I just think it could've been put together more nicely. The text could be smaller too; it was just fine in the first strip, if a little hard to read. I think it would be better in a new typeface at the old size.
Will there be an overarching plot?Last edited by Reshbj; 2010-09-11 at 01:33 AM.
Awesome Bangaa Cannoneer avatar by potatocubed.
If you want to know why my gender used to be "female", it's because I wasn't paying attention.
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2010-09-20, 08:12 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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- Starbase Janus
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2010-09-22, 12:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Oct 2008
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- Freljord
Re: The Legend Of The Blue-Footed Booby!
Nice! There should be more creativeness involving blue-footed boobies.
This should be in the fancomic section though... but I don't know off the top of my head what mods are in charge of moving thread away from this board, or to that one.Homebrewer's Signature | Avatar by Strawberries
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2010-10-20, 01:46 PM (ISO 8601)
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- Aug 2009
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- Starbase Janus
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