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    Take a look at my Ninja please

    my samurai


    My Soul Blade

    and lastly

    My Hexblade

    please :)

    I am aiming for 'tier' 3 for them but 'tier' 4 will suffice.

    I'll be taking a gander at your shaman rizban

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    @rizban - I'll try to to PEACH your class sometime tomorrow.

    EDIT: It might take more time than previously thought. Still plan on PEACHing it though.
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    Could someone please PEACH my Elemental Adept class?
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    Looking for review/help on my two re-workings for a campaign:

    The Half-Nymph Fey Race and the Barbed Whip weapon.

    If anyone stops in, PM me and I'll have a humble look at your own ideas

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    Comments on my Mender class are welcome.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ripptor View Post
    Looking for review/help on my two re-workings for a campaign:

    The Half-Nymph Fey Race and the Barbed Whip weapon.

    If anyone stops in, PM me and I'll have a humble look at your own ideas
    I'd be willing to take a gander at your race and weapon if you could give me some feedback on my recently finished Spirited Blade.

    EDIT: posted in both, hope my rambling helped.
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    Finally finished PEACHing rizban's class. Has ALOT of material and is worth a look. I don't think my jester class is actually ready for PEACHing but I still wouldn't mind some constructive criticism, and/or some ideas. I might need to make a new jester post as I'll most likely be adding much more content.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Legendxp View Post
    Finally finished PEACHing rizban's class. Has ALOT of material and is worth a look. I don't think my jester class is actually ready for PEACHing but I still wouldn't mind some constructive criticism, and/or some ideas. I might need to make a new jester post as I'll most likely be adding much more content.
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    Edit: Also, your sig link doesn't point to the first post in your jester thread.
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    I have the link posted on page 9 with a joke link right before it pertaining to the "legend of zelda" Link instead of the "hyperlinking" link.

    Although here is an additional link to my Jester class if anybody's interested.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ngilop View Post
    Take a look at my Ninja please

    my samurai


    My Soul Blade

    and lastly

    My Hexblade

    please :)

    I am aiming for 'tier' 3 for them but 'tier' 4 will suffice.

    I'll be taking a gander at your shaman rizban
    I looked at your deepwood sniper fix does that count?

    Hexer class to be looked at if any1 wants.

    I also reviewed the mender class.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zaydos View Post
    I'd be game for a few.

    Right now the things I'd want most are:
    Incarnation: Aimed to be about sorcerer power level, unfortunately I'm not sure I know how powerful domains or sorcerers are.

    Courtier: A noble/aristocrat class worth using, hopefully even by PCs.

    Morphic Claw A year old base class contest entry I was never happy with, has 2 martial disciplines to go with it.

    The other one I'm interested in asking for PEACHes for is in the current Base Class Contest and I'd feel bad asking for it here until that is done.

    Do you still need people for the Warrior/Fairy-Tale classes (Belial) and World Speaker (Jormengand)?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zaydos View Post
    and World Speaker (Jormengand)?
    Preferably, yeah, though it's not essential.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jormengand View Post
    Preferably, yeah, though it's not essential.
    We did that exchange already since the quoted post was made.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zaydos View Post
    We did that exchange already since the quoted post was made.
    Oh, that was you. Never mind. *Whacks self on head.*

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    I've almost entirely redone my Temporalist, so I'm looking for even more feedback. I'd be happy to write a detailed critique for anyone who gives me some good, constructive criticism.
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    so i don't have a lot of experiance with classes or the like, but if anyone has any items or weapons they'd like a seccon opinion on i'd be glad to help.

    As for me i'm currently looking for a seccond opinion on a Written Language i've made, i think it works fairly well, or at least better then it did before, but i'd just like to know what other people think and if i can improve on it at all.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Draconi Redfir View Post
    so i don't have a lot of experiance with classes or the like, but if anyone has any items or weapons they'd like a seccon opinion on i'd be glad to help.

    As for me i'm currently looking for a seccond opinion on a Written Language i've made, i think it works fairly well, or at least better then it did before, but i'd just like to know what other people think and if i can improve on it at all.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheWombatOfDoom View Post
    Link is not functioning. I don't think you linked us to the actual page...
    That links to the submit new thread page. The correct link is here.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jormengand View Post
    That links to the submit new thread page. The correct link is here.
    Much better. This reminds me of a project I've got up on here...perhaps we can assist each other with language making, Draconi!
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    crud sorry about that, and maybe sure, i'm mostly just looking for some feedback on what i've got right now, what about you?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Draconi Redfir View Post
    crud sorry about that, and maybe sure, i'm mostly just looking for some feedback on what i've got right now, what about you?
    Well, I'm in some ways on either side of you, and working on more languages than just one. I'll see what feedback I can give. Mine is found here if you want to read the conversation - Language Assistance

    I can't promise I'll get to yours today...working on some other reviews (including one someone has given one of my projects)...but we shall see! In the mean time, look over my thread and see if it's a fair exchange.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheWombatOfDoom View Post
    Well, I'm in some ways on either side of you, and working on more languages than just one. I'll see what feedback I can give. Mine is found here if you want to read the conversation - Language Assistance

    I can't promise I'll get to yours today...working on some other reviews (including one someone has given one of my projects)...but we shall see! In the mean time, look over my thread and see if it's a fair exchange.
    looking through your thread, i'm getting the feeling that we're actually working on very different things here. I've looked over most if not all of your posts in the thread, and while i'll admit that i haven't read every word in there, i haven't actually seen anything i can identify as building a language. you refference the insperaition for the different languages, and you talk about how they came to be in your setting, yet there are no images of what the language actully looks like, noting to actually give an opinion on. and it seems you're trying to go for full-on unique structures to the languages, whereas i'm more or less giving english a few different symbols and asking for seccond opinions on them. so i'm really not sure how i can help you with this.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Draconi Redfir View Post
    looking through your thread, i'm getting the feeling that we're actually working on very different things here. I've looked over most if not all of your posts in the thread, and while i'll admit that i haven't read every word in there, i haven't actually seen anything i can identify as building a language. you refference the insperaition for the different languages, and you talk about how they came to be in your setting, yet there are no images of what the language actully looks like, noting to actually give an opinion on. and it seems you're trying to go for full-on unique structures to the languages, whereas i'm more or less giving english a few different symbols and asking for seccond opinions on them. so i'm really not sure how i can help you with this.
    Ah, then you aren't making a language, you're making a sort of cipher. Written words in a language is really not much of in the grand scheme of language. Alright, well I'll look through your posts anyway, and see how I can help, and we'll go from there.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rizban View Post
    I'd like a review and some thoughts on my Shaman, please. Thank you.
    Posted quite a few updates since I last requested this, including a Barbarian class to go along with the new system. So, I'm requesting again.
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    I'd really like some feedback on the RPG I wrote: Link

    It a pretty short game in all, but it's still a longer thing to request a PEACH for, so I'll happily PEACH someone else's larger project in exchange.

    Specifically I'd like people to give me their thoughts on the math and if the game is clear and understandable, (if not what should I add or change)
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    I'm currently working on The Protean Chimera and wouldn't mind some outside insight. The current state seems to be pretty solid, though if anyone disagrees I would love to hear about it.

    My main focus right now is trying to root out potentially game-damaging combos and making note of them for any DMs who might feel inclined to let one of their players try the class out.

    So in the spirit of this thread I'll give your spiritist classes a looksee, Rizban.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rizban View Post
    Posted quite a few updates since I last requested this, including a Barbarian class to go along with the new system. So, I'm requesting again.
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    I'd really like some feedback on the RPG I wrote: Link)
    Quote Originally Posted by Rebonack View Post
    I'm currently working on The Protean Chimera and wouldn't mind some outside insight. The current state seems to be pretty solid, though if anyone disagrees I would love to hear about it.
    I've got midterms today (), so it'll be at least 24 hours before I have time to write some critiques, but I'd be happy to look over your projects for some reviews of my Temporalist in exchange.
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    The non-spellcasting part of my Jester class is finally ready to be PEACHed. Please note that the spell list isn't complete and subject to change. I'm currently looking at the Chimera class and might PEACH it later (I have to PEACH the Generic class first).

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    My D&D 4E conversion Final Fantasy could really use some help. I have two classes that are playable at first level (White Mage and Summoner) and I am currently working on Dancer class. Any help would be welcome.
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    My soulsword class desperately needs to be PEACH'ed. I left out all the flavor and stuff, but left in the mechanics. This should make it easier to PEACH. The class is basically just a rework of the soulknife class, except more psionically and incarnum focused.

    EDIT: Wow, I didn't realize so many soulknife reworks were out there already O_o...
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