Nights at the Round Table

[yoshi927]

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Sorry for the lateness, I got tied up a bit. Okay, really I overslept and didn't get any other chances to post, but who's counting? Eh?



Anyway, the moment we've all been waiting for. There you are.

@ the Reap drawing, you have to hand it to me, I was thinking Sephiroth.

[Raistlin1040]

*Sighs and shakes head* What are we going to do with you?

A few things. Matt. Why does he have red skin? Also, no mustache. He's not that old. James. The hair just weirds me out a bit. It just looks like a lazy mullet. The style I'm going for is unkempt, but good. Like he just got out of bed, and yet his hair kind of fell into the right place. Reap. Pale him up a bit. He's too tan for a gothic teen.

[yoshi927]

I don't have much experience in this style, agreed. In my opinion, you'd be better off picking IS. But, to defend myself, you sad Matt was dark-skinned, and I made him dark-skinned. Doesn't seem red. And I drew a goatee, also like you said... Although, you're the chief, chief.

Other than that, roger.

[Raistlin1040]

Sorry you have to edit so much Yoshi. i just really want it to look perfect.

@Szilard: Some backgrounds would be good, but hold off on NPCs except for this guy.

A good-looking human rogue. Clothing style similar to Elan's (Shirt with a vest pulled over it) but darker colors (Dark blues, brown, black ect). Untidy brown hair, brown eyes. Wields a sabre, and has a belt covered with throwing knives. If possible, make an "evil" symbol on his jacket. Have fun with it, make it the symbol of an evil god, or whatever you want really as long as it looks sort of evil, and is dark reddish.

[Szilard]

I'll get too it, do you have any specific backgrounds in mind? like forest, desert, city, a builing etc.?

Edit:Whats a Sabre? is it just a sword because I couldn't find it in the players handbook.

[Raistlin1040]

It's like a scimitar, but more stylized. The blade is more curved, and the hilt is more intricate.

Edit: A town and a forest would be good places to start.

[yoshi927]

I'm done with the revisions as of right now. I'm going to spend some time today going over them all and cleaning up lines and such, so I should have them up by tomorrow.

[Raistlin1040]

Alright then.

[yoshi927]

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Alright, there you are.

[Szilard]

The NPC:

Forest Day/Night, Town Day/Night:

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[Raistlin1040]

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Alright, there you are.

Almost perfect. Just make Matt's skin more like this color.

Edit: And Szilard, all looks good except for a few things about the rogue. 1: Don't make him smirking. Make him look more like he's bored. And 2: Change his hair from spiky, to more like mid-length around, and the bangs a bit longer and falling over his eyes.

[Raistlin1040]

...So yeah. If you guys could make these edits, I could get you a script ASAP.

[yoshi927]

I've got the edit done, I'll just update the image when I get home. Thanks for being patient, it's a really small thing that you asked for. I should've had it done way earlier.

So, about the comic size, you want it the same as Szilards?

[Raistlin1040]

Yeah, but the first comic at least will have more panels. The big panels will probably be cut in half for 8 smaller panels, unless we need a big shot. The first comic doesn't actually require Szilard at all, and he's got the PCs done, so in comic 4 or 5 when they are introduced, they'll be ready. I could send you the script for comic 1 if you're not busy.

edit: Just thought of something. I don't have a name for the comic. Any ideas?

[Szilard]

Uhh, closing? consistency? forget? suceeding saves? five rings?

Ok, Players Wanted?

[yoshi927]

Nights at the Round Table, maybe?

[Lyinginbedmon]

Rolling Vacancy

[Szilard]

[Raistlin1040]

Nights at the Round Table, maybe?

Haha. He made a punny. I like it. Also, Szilard, looks good. Yoshi's offline, but I'll send him the script for comic one, and hopefully it'll be ready in the next couple days.

[Mr_Saturn]

Uhh, closing? consistency? forget? suceeding saves? five rings?

Ok, Players Wanted?

you're hilarious.

[Raistlin1040]

And from the dark depths of my imagination, and Yoshi's art program, I bring you, the first comic.

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[Lyinginbedmon]

Colouring on our main character seems off in the final panel, but certainly Yoshi artwork. Nice to see it!

I'll list NatRT in the Webcomics Index when there's more than 1 strip.

[Maulrus]

I'm definitely going to keep an eye on this. It's looking pretty good so far.

[Szilard]

Cool comic.

[Raistlin1040]

Hey guys. I decided not to write a new script yet, because I felt like giving you (Yoshi and Szilard) a holiday break. I'm so generous . I've got an idea though, so Yoshi, expect a script in the next day or so.

[Raistlin1040]

Bah! My fault, took a while to finalize the script. But we did it, so I'm not complaining.

Comic 2-Help!

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[mockingbyrd7]

This is very impressive. It's taken a while for it to get rolling, but now that it has, I like it a lot. Just from the seven panels of the first strip, I already feel sympathetic for the main character and know what's up with him; the same with the second strip for the rest. The dialogue is concise but well-written and funny. "Okay, you see the window where it says you have to install Flash to run the program? Yeah, click "Install Flash"." That cracks me up every time.

I mean no offense to any of the numerous webcomic creators on these boards, but this comic definitely is the most grammatically correct one that I've seen. Even Failing Saves and Whitefeather occasionally have a misspelling or typo (which sometimes breaks the flow), but this is composed perfectly as well as unique and well-written.

Gah! I'm rambling. (Again? Bah! Humbug! Why, back in my day... oh, erm, yes...) Anyways, good comic. I eagerly await another installment.

[Raistlin1040]

Yay fans!

...That wasn't very professional of me was it? No, I thought not. Regardless, thanks for the compliments and be sure to keep reading.

[Szilard]

I would also be a fan, but I'm already an artist

[Bayar]

me like. But in last panel in Comic 2...did the power went out, or did the DM just went in the dark (due to the char desctiption?)