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Re: Tome of Radiance: Mastering the Power of Love and Justice
Can I offer the suggestion that instead of Armament Effects, we use the term also seen in that section, Imbuements? It's unique, describes what the effect -is- (you imbue the device with motes), and what not.
Also, I totally was half way through updating this when I realized that Armament Effects were Imbuements and not part of the Enhanced Armament class feature.
Radiant Armourer
I can't summon any more swords... Time to use magic to invoke an arrow now!
- Chloe von Einzbern, a Radiant Armourer
All evokers learn to summon a costume and device. Few however decide to refine the art of of creating weapons and armour from the light. Those that do are Radiant Armourers. Some focus on equipping their allies, while other focus on using their vast arsenal themselves. Either way, they make a number of weapons.
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To become a Radiant Armourer, you must fulfil the following criteria:
Feats: Radiant Arsenal, Twinned Device
Skills: Craft (Armorsmithing) 8 Ranks, Craft (Weaponsmithing) 8 Ranks
Class Skill List: Appraise (Int), Balance (Dex), Climb (Str), Concentration (Con), Craft (Int), Diplomacy (Cha), Handle Animal (Cha), Intimidate (Cha), Jump (Str), Knowledge [All skills, taken separately] (Int), Perform (Cha), Search (Int), Sense Motive (Wis), Spot (Wis), Swim (Str), Tumble (Dex), Use Magical Device (Cha)
Skill Points at Each Additional Level: 4 + Int modifier.
SpoilerNo changes needed here.
Radiant Armourer
Hit Dice: d8
IL = Imbuement LimitLevel Base Attack Bonus Fort Save Ref Save Will Save Special AEL AEP Illuminations 1st +0+2+0+2Radiance Wrought Arsenal, Standard Issue, Imbuements +0+12nd +1+3+0+3Radiant Arsenal, Cartridges +1 +1+1+1 level of existing class3rd +2+3+1+3Reforged Radiance +1+1+1 level of existing class4th +3+4+1+4Radiant Arsenal, Blast Forged Device +1+2+1 level of existing class5th +3+4+1+4Cartridges +2, Reflected Radiance +2+26th +4+5+2+5Radiant Arsenal +2+2+1 level of existing class7th +5+5+2+5Allied Assault +2+3+1 level of existing class8th +6+6+2+6Radiant Arsenal +2+3+1 level of existing class9th +6+6+3+6Cartridges +3 +3+310th +7+7+3+7Radiant Arsenal, Effective Arsenal, Mass Assault +3+4+1 level of existing class
IP = Imbuement Pool
SpoilerThe BAB, saves, HD, etc. worked before. No need to change them now. Minor changes to the table to account for differing abilities, as well as new columns for the addition of the armament effect pool as well as the change in how armament effect limits progresses.
Weapon and Armor Proficiency: A Radiant Armourer gains no additional weapon or armour proficiencies.
SpoilerThe dropping of class requirements for device and costume archetypes makes the weapon and armour proficiency changes no longer necessary.
Illuminations: A Radiant Armourer loses little of her power as an evoker, but she does lose some, focusing on the creation of Radiant Armaments has downsides. At each indicated level, a Radiant Armourer gains an increase in evoker level, illuminations known, illuminations readied, innate illuminations, and personas known as if they had gained a level in an illumination-using class to which they belonged before adding the prestige class level. She does not, however, gain any other benefit a character of that class would have gained. If she had more than one illumination-using class before becoming a Radiant Armourer, she must decide to which class to add each level for the aforementioned purposes.
SpoilerA minor change to wording to make it match with the most recent official PRC.
Radiance Wrought Arsenal (Ex): A Radiant Armourer is known for the armaments she can create. These armaments are drawn from her radiance wrought arsenal, hereafter referred to simply as her arsenal. The arsenal of the Radiant Armourer consists of all devices, costumes, and radiant shields she may create, from those granted by classes to those granted by the radiant arsenal and blazing aegis feats. All of these are referred to as her armaments, and the sum of all the above is the total number of armaments the Radiant Armourer possesses. When summoning her device or costume, either normally or with the twinned device feat, she may select any of her armaments of the appropriate type. While she only has so many distinct armaments, the radiant armourer may summon as many copies of a single armament as she desires, provided she has enough motes to do so.
Unlike other evokers, the Radiant Armourer is also more adept at making use of the twinned device feat. Rather than being limited to making additional copies of devices, she may make additional copies of any armament she may produce, however costumes and shields made this way not held or worn grant her no benefit. If she has the blazing aegis feat, the Radiant Armourer may select shields in place of choosing a device or costume archetype when gaining the radiant arsenal feat.
Lastly, for every level in Radiant Armourer, she is treated as having two motes invested in twinned device. These motes do not count toward the normal limit of how many motes may be invested at any given time.
SpoilerMajor rewording here to hopefully increase clarity as well as allow easier wording of later abilities. So far as what it does, it isn't much different.
Standard Issue (Ex): Unlike other magical girls who primarily use their armaments themselves, the Radiant Armourer has learned to make her armaments more intuitive to use with only a few basic tips. By spending 15 minutes training an individual, the Radiant Armourer may teach them to treat her devices as common weapons (Stance, Implement, and Marksman are treated as Simple, while all others are treated as Martial). Similarly, costumes may be treated as Light, Medium, Heavy, or no armour by one so trained (for light, medium, heavy, and aura costumes respectively). Shields in turn may be treated as any type of shield for proficiencies and abilities, though the type must be set for that given armament.
When the Radiant Armourer summons her device, she may also summon devices into the hands of allies within 30 feet, while when she summons her costume, she may summon costumes onto allies within 30 feet. In either case she must have invested the needed number of motes into twinned device to make the desired number of armaments. If the Blazing Aegis feat is possessed she may also provide shields much like devices. These shields gain the full shield bonus from any motes invested in the feat, but do not grant it to adjacent allies when used by others.
While in the hands of others, the devices are still at the Radiant Armourer's command. If she so chooses, she may apply her merciful feature to any attacks made by devices she created as a free action, causing the subsequent damage to be non-lethal.
Unfortunately, armaments used by others are not as effective as those used by the Radiant Armourer herself. As such they may only have a single Imbuement at any time, even if the Radiant Armourer herself could have more (see below for more details). Further they may not have motes invested in their costume effects.
SpoilerMostly this was just some wording edits as well as adjusting some things to take into account the new archetypes.
Imbuements: A Radiant Armourer is more skilled than most evokers at applying Imbuements. At second level and every fourth level thereafter (2, 5, 9) she may apply an additional Imbuement to her armaments. Further, unlike other evokers, she has a pool of Imbuements to draw on for all her armaments. At first level and every third level thereafter (1, 4, 7, 10) she gains one more Imbuement in her pool than her maximum amount of Imbuements able to be applied to armaments. How this works, is that when selecting Imbuements as normal for an evoker, she instead selects a distribution of effects split between each of the three types of armaments (costumes, devices, and shields). She then selects what Imbuements are in her pool, making sure that there are at least as many in each category as the number of effects applied to armaments in that category (note that shields may have both costume and device effects applied to them). For each of her armaments, she may then assign it any combination of Imbuements of the appropriate type, so long as the total number does not exceed the amount of effects allotted number of effects for that armament category. If this number is greater than two, when summoning the armament she chooses which effect will be the primary one. It is the primary effect that individuals other than the radiant armourer herself gain when using the armament. Note that multiple copies of a given armament need not have the same primary effect.
If the Radiant Armourer would always have a given Imbuement applied due to a feature from another class, it is always applied to devices, costumes, or shields she makes as appropriate. If it would always be treated as having motes invested in it, it is treated as having half that many motes invested in it when used by others. These motes do not count toward any normal limits on motes imbued in devices used by others for Radiant Armourer abilities.
SpoilerRight, this is essentially a new ability replacing Enhanced Armoury, Enhanced Weaving, and most of Arsenal Effects due to the changes. armaments. Wording seems a bit clunky, but I think overall it is simpler than how it used to be dealing with Enhanced Armoury.
Radiant Arsenal: At every even level, the Radiant Armourer gains Radiant Arsenal as a bonus feat.
SpoilerThere was no need to change this.
Cartridges (Su): At second level the Radiant Armourer gains the ability to make a cartridge for use with her devices. This acts as the champion ability of the same name and stacks with it.
Additionally, the Radiant Armourer may as a swift action load cartridges into devices and costumes she made that are being used by allies, if adjacent to them. The cartridges may be used by the one wielding the device or wearing the costume as a free action on their turn.
The Radiant Armourer gains an additional cartridge at levels 5 and 9.
SpoilerAlso no need to change this.
Reforged Radiance (Su): Unlike other magical girls, a Radiant Armourer has learned to rework her Armaments. Starting at third level, she may spend one hour to reforge a single armament. In this process she may change the archetype and/or the type of the armament so long as she retains at least one costume and one device in her arsenal. If she has the blazing aegis feat she mush also have at least one shield among the armaments in her arsenal. She may use this process to make shields among her armaments count as different types of shields (bucklers, light shields, heavy shields, or tower shields), and with or without shield spikes if applicable for that type of shield. This does not change the AC bonus granted by the shield.
Additionally, she may forge the armament in such a way that it may be imbued with motes even if she is not wielding it herself. An armament forged this way may be prepared such that it can hold a number of motes equal to half the Radiant Armourer's evoker level. As with most evokers, these motes may be applied toward enhancing the effects of Imbuements the armament possesses. If this is done, the Radiant Armourer must determine how many of the chosen type of motes can be invested in each effect applied to the armament. She may also use this process to change Imbuements applied to the given armament so long as she is selecting other Imbuements in her Imbument pool. If she later replaces an Imbuement in her pool with another, she may automatically reassign the preparation to be imbued with motes to the new effect for the device. If the device would not gain the replacing effect, she must reforge it to allow motes to be allocated to another effect.
More than just allowing motes to improve Imbuements though, the Radiant Armourer can forge armaments such that the imbued motes enhance it in other ways. She forge it such that up to half her class level motes may be applied toward granting the armament an enhancement bonus or one or more enchantments of lesser or equal value to the enhancement bonus she could grant (as well as an enhancement bonus for the remainder if she so chooses). If she chooses an enchantment, at least as many motes as that enchantment equates to in an enhancement bonus must be imbued in this effect for it to have any affect.
In the case of shields, in addition to the above options, the Radiant Armourer may prepare it to allow 2 motes to be imbued in a shield armament used by others. If this is done, the shield will grant those adjacent to the user the shield bonus it provides much like if the Radiant Armourer had imbued motes into the blazing aegis feat and was using the shield herself.
The Radiant Armourer can imbue or stop imbuing motes in armaments she creates but does not wielded in the same action she would imbue motes in to the armaments she is using herself. Additionally, if the one using the armament is capable of producing motes, she is capable of imbuing her own motes in these armaments up to the noted limit.
SpoilerFairly big change here. The loss of armament enhancements made this ability far less useful in the original version. It has been changed to allow armaments to change types and archetypes, while also allowing mote imbuing for others and enchanting. Not entirely happy with wording on this one as I feel it got kinda sloppy and confusing partway through. Suggestion to fix that are welcome.
Blast Forged Device (Su): Radiant Armourers are more focused on crafting radiant armaments than other magical girls. Even the power of illuminations may be put toward this task. Starting at 4th level, a Radiant Armourer gains access to a unique Blast illumination secondary component.
Device [Radiant Armourer]
[Mote Cost: 3m/rank]
Where most blasts consist of raw power, Radiant Armourers have taken to including devices in them. For each rank in this component, select one device you may summon. When this blast is used, add the damage and effects of that device to the damage and effects of the blast (Note it does not get Strength to damage, it does however gain the benefits of mote imbued in it if any would be). You may select the same device multiple times. If an attack roll is made, the devices in the blast may get critical hits. Roll once to confirm all criticals. Only the damage of devices that succeeded on the critical is increased, and only effects of criticals innate to the devices occur (such as those from enchantments but not those from feats). If the Radiant Armourer has the blazing aegis feat she may also choose shields for this ability, in which case it is treated as being used for a shield bash attack.
SpoilerNot much change here. Only really made note of imbued motes and that shields may be used in place of devices for shield bashes.
Reflected Radiance (Su): Starting at fifth level, the Radiant Armourer becomes more in tune with her armaments even when not using them. When she imbues motes into an armament she is using all other armaments she creates of the same type (both through twinned device and the device blast augmentation) are treated as having half as many motes imbued in them, if they able to through the reforged radiance ability.She may still choose to individually imbue motes in armaments she is not using herself, though they are not counted for this effect and would be in addition to any mote from this effect. She must choose what these motes would be applied to for the armaments upon imbuing the armaments she herself is using.
SpoilerThis would replace the part of Arsenal Effects from the original Radiant Armourer not already covered in Imbuementss above, though with some minor changes. Might need slightly better wording.
Allied Assault (Su): Starting at 7th level, the Radiant Armourer becomes able to imbue her allies' attacks with power akin to illuminations. As a standard action, the Radiant Armourer may expend up to evoker level in motes. Each ally who is wielding one of her devices may choose to apply the effects of a Blast/Assault illumination the Radiant Armourer has prepared costing 1/2 of the motes spent this way (round down) to one attack made before the beginning of the Radiant Armourer's next turn. Using this effect must be declared before the attack is rolled.
The Radiant Armourer also gains one extra prepared illumination. It may cost up to half her evoker level motes rounded down and must be a Blast illumination with the assault shape, even if she would normally not be able to make use of the assault shape when prepare illuminations. She may change this illumination as she can others when she gains an evoker level so long as it still meets the above requirements. While the allied assault ability my use this illumination, it may also use any other appropriate illuminations the Radiant Armourer has prepared.
SpoilerSo, this was almost completely changed to the suggestion by kestrel404. Differences though are the illumination having to be one the Radiant Armourer has prepared, and also giving her one extra illumination that always fits the requirements. I considered making the extra illumination only usable via this ability, but figured it wasn't that big a deal if she could use it herself.
Effective Arsenal (Su): Upon reaching tenth level, the Radiant Armourer becomes even more skilled at applying Imbuements. Armaments not used by the Radiant Armourer herself may benefit from two Imbuements instead of just one. This secondary Imbuement is chosen in the same way as the primary Imbuement.
SpoilerRight, this was changed to just allow two effects for armaments used by others. Hopefully it is clear enough in its meaning.
Mass Assault (Su): A Radiant Armourer at tenth level is a master of imbuing her devices with her power such that even those not wielded by anyone may be imbued. When using making a full attack and having her floating devices aid her as per the twinned device feat, she may apply an assault blast to the attack of the floating weapons. This blast only effects creatures that fail the reflex save for half damage, and is only applied a single time, rather than for each weapon taking part. The mote cost of assault blasts used this way may not exceed half the Radiant Armourer's evoker level.
SpoilerThis ability didn't seem to need any change. It also is able to benefit from the illumination granted by the allied assault ability.Last edited by NineThePuma; 2014-04-04 at 11:57 AM.
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Oops, my bad - it turns out Owrtho had already posted a fixed version of the Radiant Armourer on page 26, and that is the version linked to from the foirst page
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Changelog! First batch of expansions onto our newest illumination type, opening up some new critter options.
- Gluttonous companion foundation component added!
- Serene companion foundation component added!
- Frightful companion secondary component added!
- Miniature companion secondary component added!
- Amphibious companion secondary component added!
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Has it ever been considered to turn the Tome of Radiance into a PDF format? I think it would be really helpful and nice if that were a possibility in the future!
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It actually has been - it was, at one point, converted just so. That is primarily Jamie's project, though I think he is focused on the wiki at the moment. The tricky thing of course is dealing with the updates for the ToR. A PDF is always going to be behind the thread in terms of errata and content.
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Ah, I see. I was just wondering because I kind of want to run a "Tome of <BLANK>" game using the Tomes of Battle, Magic, Radiance, and Spellshaping (AKA Magical ToB) to make a Tier-3 fun-a-palooza, but my potential players want it in an easy-to-read and bookmark format. I don't know how to make PDFs, so alas I'm stuck at an impasse.
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Oh making a PDF is easy. Just copy-paste it all to a Word Document, or similar application, format it as needed/to taste and then when you go to save it; rather than picking the default file format select PDF.
If your program doesn't have the option for it, look up Foxit Reader. It has an in built PDF creator function which allows you to convert Notepad, Word documents, and other such files into PDFs or make on from scratch; which is pretty much summed up as copy-paste, format as needed/to taste, and save. Congratulations you now have your very own PDF!
THen just manually bookmark the thing as you see fit. Once your done share with your friends.
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Changelog!
- Buffed Blazing Aegis to allow summoning of tower and heavy shields as well as the buckler-esque construct it once generated. Spending a feat ought to get someone above a mediocre shield, and this does a lot to make shielded evokers (previously a rather neglected archetype) more viable.
- Added the Shining Mysticism feat! MAD is lousy, and this lets a multiclass evoker survey a much broader sweep of multiclass options.
- Added the Eager Companions feat! While many will no doubt prefer to pass on the feat expenditure, the action economy here is invaluable for anyone running a large stable of companions with the intent of combat-swapping frequently.
Hmmmmm... it is honestly not my area of expertise either. Hence Jamieth taking the role of scribe for project. If the thread format doesn't do it for them, perhaps pasting it into a word document will? It won't be terribly pretty (particularly the tables, but the text should be fine), but word docs are easy to work with.
Edit: Ninja'd - that works well too.Last edited by Selinia; 2014-04-04 at 09:32 PM.
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All really good advice guys, thank you! I'll see if that works, although they're the kind of people that like PDFs to look 'fancy'... annoys me to no end
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The current 'Fancy' looking PDF can be found here, but it is exceedingly out of date - only six PrCs present out of the 19 we're currently graced with, and a ton of other missing stuff besides. Its an odd prerequisite, but it may be better than nothing at all if it is all your group will take.
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I'll definitely get back to PDF as soon as the wiki is more or less finished.
Update: and with that, I declare the wiki up to date; switching into upkeep mode.
Update 2: since it appears I lost all the PDF source material, and since I wanted to try the 2013 Office anyway...
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Any glaring omissions before I start adding stuff?Last edited by jamieth; 2014-04-05 at 08:38 AM.
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Would Google Drive work?
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Yes, the Google Drive version looks wonderful and amazing, thank you!
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Changelog!
- Added the Cuddly companion secondary component. Never enough hugs!
- Added the Fluid companion shape component. Live out your dream of subduing foes from atop a throne of glowing bees!
- Tweaked the Stargazer - Complex Formula companions now only last for two rounds (the one in which they are summoned, and the next). Previously, Complex formulas inadvertently allowed for persistent companions of disproportionate power.
Worth mentioning, I'm also having difficulty accessing this. Mediafire just takes me to my 'My Files' page when I try to access it. I am admittedly not well versed in how that site works, but I can't find any way to actually download the file, or even just view it.
This works though. I'm only seeing the Champion, but I'm guessing that is the only one you've uploaded>?Lovely Rita Mordio avatar by Zefir! Thank you!
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It seems I screwed something with Mediafire myself; use the GD for now.
And, yes, I only made the Cbhampion for now - as I said, wanted to gather some opinions on formatting / design before putting in a lot of work into it...Tome of Radiance, a Magical Girl sourcebook for 3.5/PF.
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I'd say it probably IS too wide... The thing is, the picture is completely square. If I make it a bit smaller, to fit normal height for "iconic" pictures in real DND books, it leaves just a tiny space on the side for text, and it looks ugly; and if I fit to usual width, it becomes really small. The best option might be to crop a bit of her cape on the right side, perhaps?
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Changelog!
- Posted a link to the wiki at the top of the front page, as well as our IRC channel and server!
- Everybody give a hand to the Tome of Radiance's first official Iconic - Yarghenforgen's Janna the Dollmaker, for Fashionista!
As for the PDF so far, the way most of the published books seem to get around it is by molding the text around the edge of the picture, but I honestly have no idea if that is plausible or if it would be entirely too much work to be worth it. Barring that, a bit of downscaling or cropping might be best. Alternately, perhaps move the picture and table onto the same page and not worry about fitting other stuff onto it? That is something that I feel would work better in a two-page spread where you could still have text opposite it, but it might work. Just ideas. There's also a missing capitalization on the first word after 'Roles'.Lovely Rita Mordio avatar by Zefir! Thank you!
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Might want to just say Fluid Companions have the Swarm subtype instead of individually listing everything the Swarm subtype does.
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How does Luminous Tinker function now there are four basic types? presumably it's the three you can use, but that probably needs specifying.
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Also, a few more ideas/questions I came up with building Mira...
The Swarms component loses damage. As written, this wouldn't effect a Tremors blast. I'd suggest replacing 'Against each set of targets after the first, the luminous swarm suffers a cumulative -2d6 to damage as its energy is dispersed over an increasingly large area.' with 'Against each set of targets after the first, the luminous swarm calculates its Foundation component as if it has two motes less, as its energy is dispersed over an increasingly large area.' Has the same effect on power blasts, is slightly less painful on the others, and functions against Tremors.
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There's no way to boost mobility with surges. Neither teleporting nor even a movespeed boost. You can do an amusing chain-teleport thing using Returning barriers, but it's a lot of effort for a simple effect.
You can't create a solid/spiked/fiery wall. Something that it'd hurt people to be thrown into. Considering how much I like Tremors, this feels like a shame.
You can create a burst at range with blasts, but can't do so with surges. Presumably this is to stop you throwing a debuff onto a bunch of enemies at once. Which makes sense, as that's exactly what I wanted it for.
Back on mobility, it'd be cool to be able to use something (Like... Tremors! :P ) to propel yourself into the air. Maybe a secondary component at 1m/rank or so that makes you move 5ft/rank directly away from who/whatever you target, and negates falling damage. You could target the ground and fly. It'd be awesome. (Maybe a flat cost, but reduce the distance the target is propelled? 3m, target and you each move 5ft/2m?)
Anyhoo that's all I can recall. Mira is nearing completion. I'm probably going to make her at 17th level as well, for the fun of it.
(Sorry for double post, but there's a lot of stuff here and I want to make it visible)
Edit: Wait, there was one. Would it be possible for one of an Empath's Personae to use Companions if the other use Blasts? Biggest problem I can see with this is that they'd still have any Innate blasts.
Edit: oooh. Maybe a Surge shape component for touch range?
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Re: Tome of Radiance: Mastering the Power of Love and Justice
conceptually I'd think mobility enhancement would fit better with barrier for the sake of symmetry ...
returning barrier teleporting isn't actually that complicated, though; you set up the barrier, then use a move action to move through it.
speaking of which.
offhand maybe a secondary component which allows a barrier's effects to be selectively-effective and a maybe a secondary component which increases movement speed either through or along the edge of a barrier, probably better through the interior, and then barricades ramparts would do it?
of what currently exists, the best I'm coming up with in terms of increasing movement is dominions barrier with returning, tacking on ranks of pilgrimage as necessary.
at high levels you can impose objective directional gravity and fall your way to where you want, I guess ...
You can't create a solid/spiked/fiery wall. Something that it'd hurt people to be thrown into. Considering how much I like Tremors, this feels like a shame.
... I note that each bomb doesn't explicitly stop existing after the first explosion. they probably should.
Back on mobility, it'd be cool to be able to use something (Like... Tremors! :P ) to propel yourself into the air. Maybe a secondary component at 1m/rank or so that makes you move 5ft/rank directly away from who/whatever you target, and negates falling damage. You could target the ground and fly. It'd be awesome. (Maybe a flat cost, but reduce the distance the target is propelled? 3m, target and you each move 5ft/2m?)
I note that tremors would blast away a tarrasque, but not a small figurine ...
Edit: Wait, there was one. Would it be possible for one of an Empath's Personae to use Companions if the other use Blasts? Biggest problem I can see with this is that they'd still have any Innate blasts.
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Re: Tome of Radiance: Mastering the Power of Love and Justice
Complicated is the wrong word. It just doesn't seem to be the purpose of the component, judging by the fluff and name.
of what currently exists, the best I'm coming up with in terms of increasing movement is dominions barrier with returning, tacking on ranks of pilgrimage as necessary.
at high levels you can impose objective directional gravity and fall your way to where you want, I guess ...
that would make the restriction pointless ...
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I've had a thought at the back of my mind for a while that's been bugging me quite a bit. Like something very obvious was missing from this beautifully radiant tome. And then it hit me: races.
Thus, I present four new races for ToR: the Dawn Elf, the Constellation-Touched, the Crater Dwarf, and the Mascot.
Dawn Elves:
Elves that saw the truthful way of the sun's valor, they burned away their long lifespan to gain an innate connection to the sun's glory.
- +2 CHA, -2 WIS. Dawn Elves are intrinsically passionate, which causes them to be a bit worse at noticing social cues.
- 30 foot move speed.
- Medium Humanoid (Elf, Radiant).
- Low-light Vision.
- Innate Motes: Dawn elves innately have two motes, so a class-based mote pool has a maximum limit of two greater than normal.
- Radiant Sight: Dawn elves can imbue their eyes with a powerful glimmer. For every 1m invested in this racial trait, the Dawn Elf gains a +1 radiant bonus to Spot and Search checks.
- Weapon Proficiency: Proficient with longswords, rapiers, and shortbows.
- Favored Class: Champion.
- LA +0.
Constellation-Touched:
Humans who have had the stars smile down upon them, the constellation-touched are powerfully adaptable.
- -2 CON.
- 30 foot land speed.
- Medium Humanoid (Human, Radiant).
- Innate Motes: Constellation-touched innately have two motes, so a class-based mote pool has a maximum limit of two greater than normal.
- Radiant Adaptability: Each morning, the constellation-touched gains a bonus feat for which she meets the prerequisites, which lasts for that day.
- Constellation-touched suffer a -1 luck penalty to AC, as the stars believe that their adaptability comes at a cost.
- Favored Class: Stargazer.
- LA +0.
Crater Dwarves:
Dwarves who believe that the craters of the moon simply make its radiance mightier within their hearts, the crater dwarves are hardly lacking in prowess.
- +2 WIS, -2 CHA.
- 20 foot land speed.
- Medium Humanoid (Dwarf, Radiant).
- Darkvision.
- Innate Motes: Crater dwarves innately have two motes, so a class-based mote pool has a maximum limit of two greater than normal.
- Glimmering Rock: Crater dwarves can imbue their senses with radiant power. For every 1m invested in this racial trait, the crater dwarf gains a +1 radiant bonus to Appraise and Craft checks relating to stone and metal, and a +1 bonus to resist being tripped or bull-rushed while on the ground. If a crater dwarf has at least 4m invested in this racial trait, they gain a +2 bonus on attack rolls against goblinoids and orcs and a +2 bonus on saving throws against spells and spell-like abilities.
- Favored Class: Empath.
- LA +0.
Mascot:
Animals who were blessed with radiant sapience, the Mascots are charismatic and helpful when dealing with Evokers of any sort.
- +2 CHA, +2 INT, -2 CON, -2 STR. Mascots know and understand the light's ways, but their slight frames makes them regrettably frail.
- 20 foot base land speed.
- Small humanoid (Mascot, Radiant).
- Low-Light Vision.
- Innate Motes: Mascots have an innate mote pool of four motes. This causes class-based mote pools to have a maximum limit of four greater.
- Knowledge of Light: Mascots can imbue their minds with glistening knowledge. For every 1m invested in this racial trait, the mascot gains a +1 radiant bonus to all Knowledge checks to do with evokers and evoking. For every 3m invested in this racial trait, the mascot gains a +1 radiant bonus to Knowledge checks in general.
- Helping Hand: Mascots can assist their allies with the power of light. For every 2m invested in this racial trait, when the mascot uses the aid another action, they provide an additional +1 bonus.
- Favored Class: Any.
- LA: +0.
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