Quote Originally Posted by icastflare! View Post
ehh, I am no critic but if it makes sense and can use a some detail and is dnd related I think its good.

BTW: any comments about the newest edition of Rogue Love: because it will always be bolded and never unbolded
It's okay. There are some grammatical errors, and I feel there's something...I dunno. Maybe show, don't tell? (Though I feel that's a problem for me too.)