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2009-04-13, 05:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
The italics mean he's singing, by the way.
This is my comic starring the little pink guy himself. I'm new to inkscape, so the art might not be that great all the time.
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I accept all criticism, good or bad.Last edited by Rae Artemi; 2010-08-06 at 07:36 PM.
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2009-04-17, 02:03 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Interesting, has potential. So is Kirby responsible for Lincoln's Assasination???
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2009-04-17, 02:09 PM (ISO 8601)
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2009-04-17, 03:04 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
The Punch-line was a little weak, but hey. It's the first comic.
I want you to take a look at this picture:
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Notice that Kirby doesn't have quite as wide eyes as you give him. Otherwise, I think it can be good.I won a thread. Am I pathetic to list that in my signture? Yes. Of course I am.
Awesome avatar is awesome. And made by yldenfrei.
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2009-04-17, 03:15 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
I don't want to sound too critical or anything, but don't you think taking Kirby as the main character of your comic feels somewhat like a rip-off?
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2009-04-17, 09:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
How to: Glibness
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2009-04-18, 07:11 AM (ISO 8601)
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- Canada, okay?! Yeeesh.
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Not just that, but it also could make the story weaker. We all know Kirby already, making his character uninteresting and character development harder, if not impossible.
Still, I'm not closed to the concept of this being a good comic. After all, we have only seen one comic so far.AVATAR BATTLE ROYALE!
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2009-04-18, 10:48 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Oh I am all in favor for giving this comic a chance.
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2009-04-18, 09:17 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
I'll have a new comic up tomorrow, too tired to think up script.
Originally Posted by GrlumpTheElder
Originally Posted by CapedLuigiYoshi
Originally Posted by Ichneumon
Originally Posted by the_Q
1. this comic takes place outside the traditional Kirby universe
2. there is an entire race of kirby's, it's not too far a stretch to think that more than one may end up being named Kirby.
Thank you all for your comments/critisism/questions.I made comics!
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2009-04-18, 11:31 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
So, the name of Kirby's race is Kirby. Individual kirbies can have different names, but the race as a whole is referred to as Kirby because of the one Exemplar of the race: Kirby.
I wonder if there was once a human named Human who epitomized all anyone could be...maybe this kirby could usurp Kirby and change the name of his entire race.
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2009-04-19, 12:43 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Comic 2
comments, critique, questions, carrots (not really)?Last edited by Rae Artemi; 2009-04-19 at 01:06 PM.
I made comics!
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2009-04-19, 01:02 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
*leaves thread forever*
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2009-04-19, 01:10 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
I made comics!
Crae is the bestest daddy,
I make avatars, all you have to do is ask, and I'll do it if I can.
My Awards
I've got a Formspring, ask me questions if you want.
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2009-04-19, 01:19 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
You need to work on your dialogue.
Also, "Michael Jackson is a paedophile" jokes are not funny.
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2009-04-19, 01:51 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
I can't see the comic if I ignore you though.
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2009-04-19, 02:45 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Last edited by The Blackbird; 2009-04-19 at 02:47 PM.
How to: Glibness
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2009-04-19, 05:56 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Judging by the reactions, the comic wasn't very good, and rereading it myself, It wasn't anywhere near as good as my half-asleep mind thought it was, so either tomorrow or tuesday after school I'll remake comic 2 without Michael.
I made comics!
Crae is the bestest daddy,
I make avatars, all you have to do is ask, and I'll do it if I can.
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2009-04-21, 07:05 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Comic 2 redo
Comments, critique, questions random babble about Kirby?I made comics!
Crae is the bestest daddy,
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2009-04-21, 07:52 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
How to: Glibness
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2009-04-22, 05:11 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Originally Posted by Blackbird97Last edited by Rae Artemi; 2009-04-23 at 07:36 PM.
I made comics!
Crae is the bestest daddy,
I make avatars, all you have to do is ask, and I'll do it if I can.
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2009-04-23, 07:35 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Comic 3 is up
Questions, comments, that other one?
In related news: CONTEST!
This is a pretty simple one, I'm letting you guys, my readers, make the name for the cat. The person who's name I choose will get a cameo in the comic, and will be featured in the comic's First sig banner.I made comics!
Crae is the bestest daddy,
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2009-04-23, 07:47 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
They're quite good.
The art's good, but the dialogue does need a little work.
I do like the idea of the guy on the phone understanding the cat.
May I suggest the very original name of Dr. McCat for the cat?
No, on second thoughts, how about Fedora? Ties in with the Hat theme nicely, and I just thought how awesome it would be to have a cat named Fedora.
*runs off to get another cat, just to call it Fedora*BANG → !
OH LOOK AT HER/.../YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN/YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN/YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN MEAN/RICHARDS
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2009-04-23, 09:07 PM (ISO 8601)
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2009-04-23, 09:11 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
I vote for the cats name to be, Blackbird.
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2009-04-24, 04:07 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
What about Trilby?
It's hat related and sounds similar to Kirby.Grlump the Elder, a Lvl. 5 Gnome Barbarian with a penchant for food.
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2009-04-27, 09:02 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
comic 4 is up
Questions comments, critique, more cat names?
By the way, the cat is a boy. The cat name contest will end this saturday at 12:00 p.m. EST, and I should have the comic that introduces the cat's name later that day, however you may not get your cameo until near comic 10.I made comics!
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2009-04-27, 09:34 PM (ISO 8601)
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2009-04-28, 04:53 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Last edited by Rae Artemi; 2009-04-28 at 04:56 AM.
I made comics!
Crae is the bestest daddy,
I make avatars, all you have to do is ask, and I'll do it if I can.
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2009-05-03, 08:43 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Kirby's Quest for Hats, an OOTS style comic.
Sorry about the lack of updates lately, I have been busy, but I do have some things to say.
1. There will be at least one comic up tomorrow, two if I have enough time/ if I can get my attention span to get in to one of It's stretchy moods.
2. The winner of the cat name contest is GrlumpTheElder, honorable mention goes to Dogmantra, but Fedora doesn't sound like a boy cat's name. Grlump will get both of his cameos by Wednesday at the latest.
3. I did get some things done this week though, I tweaked some of the characters a little and added in some of the subtle details that distinguish good artwork from pretty good artwork. These little tweaks will be shown in the next few comics.Last edited by Rae Artemi; 2009-05-03 at 08:44 PM.
I made comics!
Crae is the bestest daddy,
I make avatars, all you have to do is ask, and I'll do it if I can.
My Awards
I've got a Formspring, ask me questions if you want.
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2009-05-04, 02:59 AM (ISO 8601)
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Grlump the Elder, a Lvl. 5 Gnome Barbarian with a penchant for food.