Crack Pairings Matchup Table

[The Odor]

Thanks. Any chance of some more feedback?

Odor: I thought it was good, but the grammar kind of distracted me from the story. Not wishing to be a nazi or anything, but still.

My grammar sucks. I know. Anything in particular.

[Zanaril]

Thanks. Any chance of some more feedback?

I think one of the things you could do to improve is rather than have V telling us what happened, show what's going on. Get inside the character's head and write it as though they were narrating it to themselves as it happened.

For instance, instead of saying "There was a mirror on the wall next to my bed, and I caught myself sneaking peeks at Miss Starshine as she undressed."

Go with something like:

"I sat down cross legged on my bed, rearranging my robe into a more comfortable position. As reached for a book, a movement in the mirror caught my eye, and I looked up, then looked down hurredly when I saw that it was Miss Starshine removing her leather armour. An unwelcome heat spread across my face, and I realised I was blushing. Why was I blushing? I raised my head again, but to my horror found my eyes drawn to the mirror once again, as if on their own accord."

The style you have sounds more like what someone would write in their diary. Which I suppose could work, but is kind of limiting.

[TheBibliophile]

I think one of the things you could do to improve is rather than have V telling us what happened, show what's going on. Get inside the character's head and write it as though they were narrating it to themselves as it happened.

For instance, instead of saying "There was a mirror on the wall next to my bed, and I caught myself sneaking peeks at Miss Starshine as she undressed."

Go with something like:

"I sat down cross legged on my bed, rearranging my robe into a more comfortable position. As reached for a book, a movement in the mirror caught my eye, and I looked up, then looked down hurredly when I saw that it was Miss Starshine removing her leather armour. An unwelcome heat spread across my face, and I realised I was blushing. Why was I blushing? I raised my head again, but to my horror found my eyes drawn to the mirror once again, as if on their own accord."

The style you have sounds more like what someone would write in their diary. Which I suppose could work, but is kind of limiting.

Thanks. I'll try and keep that in mind for later installments.

[xelliea]

What's Grifball?

Grifball.http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/Grifball

Exactly!
Who needs sports when we have Dnd, OOTS, RvB, Halo, and the all important Grifball!

You sound just like my younger brother, I enjoy some Halo 3 from time to time, but work takes up most of my life.

[Lycan 01]

Finally got my dice back!

I did some rolls, but most of the pairings were either boring (Nale x Durkon? I'm sure that's been done...) or I just couldn't do that. (Rolled two 19s on table 3, and ended up with about 7 people who I couldn't remember. )

However, 3 did stand out...

The Guy with the Halberd x The Hydra

The Guy with the Halber x All the Demon Roaches

Roy's Archon x All the Demon Roaches


Am I allowed to address multiple pairings in one story?

[Thor Person Guy]

Am I allowed to address multiple pairings in one story?

If you can manage that, you will likely be ushered to wherever this thread's Crack Gods hang out. That one kinda got away from me.

[Zanaril]

If you can manage that, you will likely be ushered to wherever this thread's Crack Gods hang out. That one kinda got away from me.

We have an vending machiene that never runs out. The currency required is tears and happyness.

[Funky Goose]

Another dose of Redcloack/V
enjoy

[ClericOfBelker]

We have an vending machiene that never runs out. The currency required is tears and happyness.

And Cookies!

Also-

Also:

-*stab*

[Cracklord]

We have an vending machiene that never runs out. The currency required is tears and happyness.

which we can no longer supply ourselves, and must drain them from newer members to this thread.

[Zanaril]

which we can no longer supply ourselves, and must drain them from newer members to this thread.

Exactly.

-*stab*

*dodges mob*

[ClericOfBelker]

*dodges mob*

/Summon ! (Does "Pie" Damage! Enemy Slain!)

Loot: 3 Bottles of Tears

3 Internets gained

[BatRobin]

Cliffport Chief of Police and Nale with True Love.


Ironic, no?

[Zanaril]

/Summon ! (Does 69 Damage!)

You do know I can't post if I'm dead.

[Malkar Grumbo]

You do know I can't post if I'm dead.

Don't worry! I know resurrection!... Does anyone have a big ass diamond I can borrow?

[Funky Goose]

Hem Hem...

[Alchemist Kren]

As Roy cuts of the zombie dragon head, a black dragon comes and catches it, gets the heads hoard, and brings them both to its cave, and get snowed in.can you guess what happens next?

[Malkar Grumbo]

Hem Hem...

Oh right! Good work on the picture.

[Zanaril]

Don't worry! I know resurrection!... Does anyone have a big ass diamond I can borrow?

Yea, but at the end of it I was still stabbed and you're one diamond down.

Hem Hem...

I love RC's expression in the last two panels.

[Cracklord]

Hem Hem...

Very expressive.

[Malkar Grumbo]

Yea, but at the end of it I was still stabbed and you're one diamond down.



I love RC's expression in the last two panels.

Can't blame a guy for trying.

[Alchemist Kren]

I KNOW FREE RESURRECTION!You jus t have to swear your body, soul, and mind to me.You also have to do whatever I say. A nd you might become a skeleton in a few years.

[Zanaril]

You jus t have to swear your body, soul, and mind to me.

What soul?

[Gimliggamer]

they all basically translate to "the coloured thing" or "the thing in the middle".

I'm sorry, but it had to be done.



THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!

[Gimliggamer]

If you can manage that, you will likely be ushered to wherever this thread's Crack Gods hang out. That one kinda got away from me.

They hang out at the Lord of the Rings:The Thread thread.

*cough*Minion992929*cough*

[Lycan 01]

Another dose of Redcloack/V
enjoy

I have a feeling V's day is about to get a bit... weird.


Soooo... if I manage to pull off the whole "3 pairings in one story" thing, will ya'll not harvest me of my tears?

[Malkar Grumbo]

I KNOW FREE RESURRECTION!You jus t have to swear your body, soul, and mind to me.You also have to do whatever I say. A nd you might become a skeleton in a few years.

What is this "soul" you mention?

[Alchemist Kren]

What soul?

Fine,body,mind, and first born son.

[Malkar Grumbo]

and first born son.

That is so cliche, couldn't you ask for the second born one?

[Alchemist Kren]

That is so cliche, couldn't you ask for the second born one?

fine,first born daughter