Bibliography II

[Mina Kobold]

Well... wolves are scent oriented creatures for just about everything... just saying it might be a werewolfish way to say she thinks he's cute.

Logic has never stopped us from speculating before

I personally think he smells like dust, books and less like technological thingamajigs than the others do.

Or perhaps of burrito, that's viable* too

*Did I use that word right?

[SlyGuyMcFly]

Nah, he's not a Page of the Old Spice Codex.

This Codex is now diamonds.

Members of the Old Spice Codex gain: Total Hawtness, Transmutation and Teleportation.
Members of the Old Spice Codex lose: The ability to wear shirts.

[The Dark Fiddler]

Ten bucks says Eve is Rina-chan.

Can Ben be Kirbopher?

Members of the Old Spice Codex gain: Total Hawtness, Transmutation and Teleportation.
Members of the Old Spice Codex lose: The ability to wear shirts.

Spell 1: I'm on a Horse - The user is suddenly on a horse, completely obedient to him.

[Lix Lorn]

Spell 2: DIAMONDS.
Whatever you were holding is now diamonds.

[Yorrin]

Spell 3: Pure Manly Scent
The user exudes a smell of pure manliness. All male creatures within range are struck by feelings of inadequacy. All female creatures in range are overcome with feelings of desire.

[Lix Lorn]

Spell 4: SWAN DIVE
Ignore physics for the next five seconds while looking exceedingly heroic.

[HalfTangible]

Or perhaps of burrito, that's viable* too

*Did I use that word right?

Yes but you forgot to put an 'a' in front of 'burrito'

[Mina Kobold]

Yes but you forgot to put an 'a' in front of 'burrito'

Not really, he doesn't necessary smell like a particular number of burritos but if he does I bet it's Forty-Two

[HalfTangible]

Not really, he doesn't necessary smell like a particular number of burritos but if he does I bet it's Forty-Two

in that case you forgot the 's' at the end of burrito

[EternalMelon]

Now i want togo make someone from the old spice codex.

[HalfTangible]

Spell 4: SWAN DIVE
Ignore physics for the next five seconds while looking exceedingly heroic.

Spell 5: Cheesy Commercial
Target is trapped in an illusion showcasing that old spice deodorant stuff. If female or gay has a high chance of setting the opponent's clothing on fire.

[Maximum Zersk]

Can Ben be Kirbopher?

You mean Tall Jesus?

[Prime32]

Can Ben be Kirbopher?

No, he cannot be forgiven for dropping TTA. *shakes fist*

You mean Tall Jesus?

...tall?

[Maximum Zersk]

...tall?

In one Crossover Review, the credits wrote him as "Tall Jesus".

[Prime32]

My joke was that Rina-chan seems to be the only female VA on the internet at times.

There are at least two male VAs, Egoraptor and Omahdon.

[Maximum Zersk]

My joke was that Rina-chan seems to be the only female VA on the internet at times.

There are at least two male VAs, Egoraptor and Omahdon.

But I didn't ask what the joke was about...

[Elagune]

Page 11

I messed around with the art again. Like always.

Animating Bibliography? Once I get funding from Nickelodeon and manage to get a Korean studio under contract, sure. Until then Bibliography stays on your monitors instead of on your TV screens

Reminiscent of Twilight? Is... is that a good thing?

[Lix Lorn]

Reminiscent of Twilight is generally considered BAD.
This page, however? As good as ever!

[EternalMelon]

What if my Tv screen is the same as my computer?
Still, great page, oh and ROAD TRIP!
Kinda

[Creed]

What evil machine could be in the background of panel 3!
Maybe it incinerate things
Oh wait, that's a vending machine next to a water cooler and a stack of cups.
Whoops.

[Gez]

Still, great page, oh and ROAD TRIP!
Kinda

Yeah, kinda. I don't think it counts as a road trip if they stay in the same city. And go there by foot/bus/tramway/metro/monorail/bicycle/rollerblades/skateboard rather than by car.

[HalfTangible]

Reminiscent of Twilight is generally considered BAD.
This page, however? As good as ever!

i dunno =/ seemed to me like he went overboard with the shading.

As for the twilight thing - it really depends on whether or not the person actually likes Twilight and what part they're referring to.

Also: do i detect a subtle south park reference, Elagune? =D

[Yorrin]

Also: do i detect a subtle south park reference, Elagune? =D

This. This is the first thing I saw. Changed the tone of the rest of the page for me.

[Elagune]

Guys. By now you should know references are how I roll.

And the shading in this one might look a little different. I tried going for a more traditional feel with the shading, and I really like how it ended up looking on the characters. I'd better go back to my old thing with backgrounds, though.

EDIT: Don't be afraid to critique me. I experiment with my pages all the time, so it's important for me to know what's working and what's not. Of course, this doesn't guarantee I'll change it, but I have to know what people think of any changes.

[Silverraptor]

For some reason, this page looks a little... sloppy to me. I don't know why...

[rocketpony]

'gune, how do you color these pages? Do you do it digitally, or are you coming directly from a B/W scan?
Having a halo between colored areas and outlines makes it look kind of weird - Satomi's hair looks like it's been wrapped with plastic, or something. The ceiling against the dyanmic duo also looks kind of weird. Such are my thoughts on separating blacks by white halos.

Also who has two thumbs and totally called the book smell
d(o.o)b it was this guy.

ROAD TRIP
And we all know what the next stop is gonna be...
Set your watches it is now Opal o'clock on Bilbiography Time.

[ka_bna]

Guys. By now you should know references are how I roll.

And the shading in this one might look a little different. I tried going for a more traditional feel with the shading, and I really like how it ended up looking on the characters. I'd better go back to my old thing with backgrounds, though.

Aww, I really like the shading on this page!

[Hyoumu Yau]

For some reason the teeth in the last panel caught my attention...
(Not in the sense that they look wrong or something)
And yeah, the shading looked great
I only disliked it in panel five, where there is this white space between the hair and the ceiling.

[The Dark Fiddler]

EDIT: Don't be afraid to critique me. I experiment with my pages all the time, so it's important for me to know what's working and what's not. Of course, this doesn't guarantee I'll change it, but I have to know what people think of any changes.

Hmm... the only thing I can think of is that Eve looks a bit different... maybe her face is a bit longer?

Actually, looking back (comparing current page to page 1 of the chapter) I think what's throwing me off is the different shading in her hair? I dunno, I'm not much of a critic...

(Spell 6 of the Old Spice Codex: Building Kick - The user kicks a building dealing great structural damage.)

[Yorrin]

Old Spice Codex Spell 7: Costume Change
The user is now wearing an outfit appropriate to whatever setting they are in. This spell requires no movements from the user, and seem to suddenly happen to them as if by external forces.