Inconsistency-webcomic

[OverWilliam]

Wow. I did not expect it to be over so quickly.

[Szilard]

It was kinda abrupt, but it would have been better with an explosion, not a heart attack. But thats just my Idea, the concept of the universe having a heart was a great Idea.

[Ichneumon]

Thank you, yeah I thought of an explosion too, but I had no idea how to draw it without getting out of the style.

[Nameless]

Just copy and past a picture of an A-Bomb.

[Szilard]

2001 style, have a bunch of monoliths duplicate and eat a big planet causeing nuclear fuision, planet turns into a sun and everything around it is engulfed, that woud sset of several explosions nad start a convenient chain reaction engulfing the entire universe with war! ... I mean fire, sorry I was thinking about Star Wars for a second, when there is nothing left for the fire to burn, the universe is extinquished, literally. I love death and destruction

[xwd]

I think I can sum up the ending in one word: ANTICLIMAX! Just like the first week of Duel where the last fight ends with the first question. :P
So, are you going to build another "universe" based on this one, and maybe have clues of the first seep into the second? Parallel dimensions? Time travel? Flashback montages? Dream sequences? Low-resolution images of old electronics?

[DarkCloud]

I have a question. The comic arc from 12-14 didn't really seem to wrap up- what was the ending to the subplot... If that subplot also ended in the heart attack, then it DID manage to underscore the meaninglessness of war (since the universe was going to end anyways). Was that what you were intending? If so, maybe it would have been good to add some closure to the other guys- even one or two panels with them vanishing as they're planning.

Aside from being confused at some points about the purpose of comics (such as #13's map and the other map- I guess the maps were to indicate the dying organs, but it seemed like things were moving around on the maps- why exactly was that?)

I really enjoyed this comic- it is by far the most "literary" of those on offer here at GiTP.

I am definitely looking forward to Episode II.

~DC.