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2011-01-09, 03:20 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
I too have to agree that they look like they're smiling all the time. I would also suggest you make the eyebrows shorter and without the rounded edges - it might just be me, but I think those look kind of strange.
Last edited by M@XWeru; 2011-01-09 at 03:36 PM.
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2011-01-09, 03:30 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-01-09, 06:51 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
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2011-01-09, 07:10 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-01-10, 10:17 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
hmmm, you got me hooked.
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2011-01-10, 01:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
I dunno, it looks like the sarcastic half smile Smith always wears in the matrix. A blank automatic look, the eyebrows being the real teller. I had no issue, using the eyebrows, to determine what emotions were used. and they looked more like , well, open talking mouths, then any kind of an expression.
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2011-01-10, 06:00 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
i like it, it is a lot like the agents and their fixed facial expressions. just watch the eyebrows and they give you all the info you need.
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2011-01-11, 08:57 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
If you reference actual OOTS style, you'll notice that smiles are different. For example, in the most recent comic (767), you'll notice that in panel 2, Elan is smiling, while Haley is not. If you put all their faces in the "smiling" position, it's going to confuse people.
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2011-01-12, 12:28 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
Im not sure what you are using to reference "smiling position" here. The main difference that i can see is that the outside edge of the open mouth cuts straight down on Elan's mouth, whereas its more of a PacMan shape on Haley's. In which case, the agent's mouths ALL fit haley's non smile, not Elan's smile. In addition, the agents have mouths with a bit more curve along the top lip, curved up seems a smile, curved down seems not a smile. I just don't see it, myself.
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2011-01-21, 11:30 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
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2011-01-21, 11:45 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
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2011-01-22, 02:00 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-01-22, 02:52 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
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2011-01-22, 05:08 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
Heh. Irate avians. Nice one. Neat little comic, can't wait to see further plot develop.
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2011-01-22, 09:41 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
this (the above comic #4) makes no sense to me, can someone explain it?
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2011-01-28, 03:45 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
after the 3 cycals, he got lewis back. since lewis lost is memory, he doesnt know wat a gun or the outer missing files are, so hes running away and jumping off the window
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2011-01-28, 04:10 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-01-28, 06:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
Ahh. I was thinking that the missing memory guy was the first agent, sent after Lewis, who has now ALSO lost his memory, my bad.
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2011-01-28, 07:33 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
ahhhhh
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2011-01-28, 08:47 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
As I see it, the difference between oots style smiling and... Other is that the left of the mouth (with the speaker looking right) is curved for Other and the top is entirely flat when they're smiling.
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2011-01-30, 01:10 PM (ISO 8601)
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2011-03-08, 06:25 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
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2011-03-25, 09:10 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
This is cool! Please make more!
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2011-04-07, 08:16 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
Last edited by Hiro Protagonest; 2011-06-30 at 10:52 PM.
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2011-06-01, 11:23 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
I just realized he was playing angry birds in the background.
That is hands down the best background gag I have seen.
SpoilerOn another note, if you return to this comic, can you make each agent more distinct?
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2011-06-02, 12:54 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: The Agent: An OOTS-Style Sci-Fi Webcomic
Why thank you. Both for the compliment, and for making me realize how long Angry Birds has remained popular...
Why the spoiler tags?
And yes, if I do, I will most certainly make them look more distinct. Summer holidays are coming up, which means lots of free time, so there's a pretty good chance that I'll reboot this whole thing in spirit. Maybe with a few alterations, but that's for me to know, and you to find out.
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2011-06-02, 04:53 AM (ISO 8601)
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2011-06-03, 01:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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