Rightio.
SpoilerYep. I like him. A Reclusiarch with Melta Bombs and Jump Pack might be a better fit. Maybe.Gabriel Seth 160
This is pretty expensive. You can get a ten-man Assault Squad for about the same points. Considering your lack of Troops...Yeah.Honour Guard (5) 195
Razorback (Extra Armor, HK Missile, Heavy Flamers)
Yep.Furioso Dreadnought 175
Librarian (Wings of Sanguinius, Might of Heroes)
Sanguinary Priest 75
Jump PackOnly five? Sad Face.Assault Squad (5) 140
Power Fist, Infernus Pistol
I guess. But, I'm not a fan of 'just one' Scout Squad. I find that they just don't do enough.Scout Squad (10) 150
Sniper Rifles, Missile Launcher
100 points for 3 models is pretty expensive.Death Company (3) 105
Jump Packs
In 1000 points you should be looking at 3 Scoring Units. You have two. And one is minimum-size.
More points! I'm only just commenting on things that I haven't already. Gabriel Seth and the Dread are still rockin'.1500 Points
SpoilerStill pretty expensive. But, you're sitting on 1500 points so it's not really that big of a deal. Although you could give them Jump Packs for cheaper.Honour Guard (5) 195
Razorback (Extra Armor, Heavy Flamers)
Yep.Assault Terminators (5) 210
2x Thunder Hammer, 3x Lightning Claws
These are actually one unit. Just saying. At the moment it looks like you've got four Elite choices.Sanguinary Priest 75
Jump Pack
Sanguinary Priest 85
Terminator Armour
So...You've got an extra 500 points to play with, and you don't upgrade or add to your Troops at all?Assault Squad (5) 140
Power Fist, Infernus Pistol
Scout Squad (10) 150
Sniper Rifles, Missile Launcher
Death Company (3) 105
Jump Packs
"GG man, GG."
I suppose. Although don't be surprised if it dies in the first turn leaving your Terminators in the cold. Everyone knows by now that I hate the Stormraven. So, there is that. Ceramite Plating doesn't protect against Krak Missiles and Lascannons, even Autocannons have an outside shot. Ceramite Plating doesn't even protect against Rending weapons like Assault Cannons.Stormraven Gunship 215
Extra Armour
Like the Monolith, people are in fits on whether Melta Bombs work 'properly' on Stromravens...They do, by the way.
Melta Bombs have +2d6 Penetration, not 1d6+1d6 like normal Melta weapons. Melta Bombs don't roll 'extra' d6. "RAWr!"
That's my issue too.Both the lists are pretty much the same- my main concern would be not having enough troops.
Also, any decent shooting army, or, in fact any army that makes use of METAL BAWKSES wont be pleasant for you. Your army has expensive single models and low unit numbers.
Secondly, any other dedicated close combat army (which are probably just as fast as you) will have fun against you. The only unit you've got that stand up to any Assault punishment is the Terminators, and even they can be defeated by superior numbers and/or Power Weapons.