Slice N' Dice (A non-OOTS-Style Comic!)

[Wreckingrocc]

What made her think an eagle could hold a full-grown man in mid-air?

Oooh! And the armor! Don't forget the armor!

And she calls herself a ranger!

Druid, but... Close enough :)

[Trizap]

hmmmmmmmmmm.........sorry this doesn't seem funny, I see nothing but a bunch of stereotypes and a normal adventure story, there isn't really anything about it that makes it funny, unique art will get you nowhere if your jokes are no good, and theres little character interaction, not a lot of depth.

I apologize if I sound like a jerk, but that is all I see in it.

[Wreckingrocc]

OotS has made it the past one hundred strips without being funny.

SnD is sort of a different sense of humor. It's either very funny or not funny. Or it's not funny the first time through, but funny when you look at the random stupidity in the character's logic and plans. The major issue is lack of development, though (I think). Each one takes about six hours to do, and each only has 8 panels. It takes a very long time to do, and you can't rapid fire jokes when each panel takes forty five minutes to make. I have many ideas, but it may take a while to actually get to the pace where I can churn them out. (Chapter one was originally supposed to have about 20 pages, but at this rate it's looking like it's going to be at least 30).

[Trizap]

mmmmmmmmm...........mistake.
if you didn't reply to that, I wouldn't have to argue with you, I hate arguing its not productive.

OOTS has been just as funny as it has always been, its just that everyone else has let little details ruin the whole experience for them, I have not, and I know the whole arc is necessary to the plot, if I were in Rich's position I would done this subplot just like this regardless of peoples opinions.

as I have focused on the good things that has been happening in the comic recently, I have not let the little details ruin the experience of reading the comic, and I'm satisfied with how its going, I look at the big picture, and the big picture with OOTS is: good, I look at the big picture of Slice N' Dice, and I read bland.

I know this is a difference in opinion, not fact so I will refrain from arguing with you any longer as it might get the thread locked, and while I might not see the humor in it, someone else does, once again I apologize if I sound like a jerk when I say Slice N' Dice doesn't seem funny to me.

good day.

[Fawkes]

I give Slice and Dice a ranking of Needs Improvement. I rank my attitude toward the comic as Cautious Optimism. I rank Trizap as Troll Wearing Lipstick. I rank Nameless Grand King of the Pixies.

I rank this post Unnecessarily Random.

That is all.

[T-O-E]

Troll Wearing Lipstick.

What? That photo was destroyed, I made sure of it!

[BRC]

What? That photo was destroyed, I made sure of it!

*Sigh* trolly trolly Troll. You don't destroy the PHOTO, you need to destroy the negatives and any copies that had been made. of course nowadays, now that everybody has digitial cameras, a picture can be stored in hundreds of hidden places all over the world within seconds.

[Wreckingrocc]

I'll make a new one soon. The only problem is the length. You can't do much with 8-panel comics, but when the art takes even longer... Six hours per 8 frames is rough. Once I get better and begin to be able to reuse images, it should improve. My planned jokes will get funnier than my improv, though.

[Fawkes]

I could've sworn I was already subscribed...

Well, I am now.

[KingChuckles]

Hey TnD, what's up? You're comics are coming along fine, I'm impressed. I'm working on my own, but they're not quite done. Actually, I've just started!
Please note the purpose of this post is to give you a heads up that cousin chucks created an account!

[Wreckingrocc]

Awesome!

I'll try to make a comic ASAP. I have been on vacation for four days without internet. I have a ton of homework tomorrow, and I have karate, so I probably won't be able to do it for awhile. Expect it by this Sunday, though.
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Ha! Take THAT, Procrastination!

Comic #1, Page 16: Well, I Guess that Technically Works...

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[Lyinginbedmon]

I'm not entirely sure what she just did but certainly she's a crafty one

[Wreckingrocc]

She jammed the spear between the doorknob, the torch, and the wall. Now, the door is jammed, and the kobolds are trapped inside. The spear is thick and sturdy enough that the kobolds cannot hope to force the door open without help from the outside. I'll probably make that more clear as she explains it to the group in a later comic. I made record time, though. This one took me less than 2 hours

[Devigod]

It might be more clear if in the last panel she wasn't standing in front of the door and spear. It would be more easily noticed that she jammed it there, and that she wasn't just standing there holding it or something.