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2008-03-30, 09:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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Slice N' Dice (A non-OOTS-Style Comic!)
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-The Comics:SpoilerComic #1, Page 1: The Notice BoardsComic #1, Page 2: Meeting the TeamSpoilerComic #1, Page 3: A New HelmetSpoilerComic #1, Page 4: Intelligence was his Dump StatSpoilerComic #1, Page 5: Slyskarzenken and ZsaskrazrSpoilerComic #1, Page 6: Unexpected AidSpoilerComic #1, Page 7: The Random EncounterSpoilerComic #1, Page 8: Lunch TimeSpoilerComic #1, Page 9: Looting the BeastSpoilerComic #1, Page 10: Man, Kobolds Can't JumpSpoilerComic #1, Page 11: The Entrance...? Part 1SpoilerComic #1, Page 12: The Entrance...? Part 2SpoilerComic #1, Page 13: The Rise and Fall of Kent AladrisSpoilerComic #1, Page 14: Ninja SkillsSpoilerComic #1, Page 15: A Very Predictable OutcomeSpoilerComic #1, Page 16: Well, I Guess that Technically Works...Spoiler
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Special thanks to The Giant for partial inspiration and website hosting.
Special thanks to Zarah for helping me with the formatting and image hosting advice.
Special thanks to Phase for coming up with the title.
I update once every week on Sunday, or more if I have excessive amounts of free time that week. Regular updates will begin on Sunday, September 6.Last edited by Wreckingrocc; 2008-10-24 at 09:49 PM. Reason: Update- Comic 1-16
The artist formerly known as Tired N' Drowzy, master of puns.
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2008-03-30, 09:46 AM (ISO 8601)
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Looks pretty good. A little overdone though, as we've seen adventuring parties fifteen-billion times before in fan-made comics.
The new style is certainly refreshing.
Also, why are the Orcs and half-orcs always the idiots. There are smart Orcs too, you know. The one in my comic is intelligent.AVATAR BATTLE ROYALE!
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2008-03-30, 09:52 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
Just to be picky, in comic number 3 it should be "the artist" not "the animator". The comic isn't an animation after all.
Hi, I'm back, I guess. ^_^I cosplay and stream LPs of single player games on Twitch! Mon, Wed & Fri; currently playing: Fallout: New Vegas (Mon/Wed) and The Legend of Zelda: Oracle of Seasons (Thurs or Fri)
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2008-03-30, 09:56 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
I based it on a recurring joke me and my brother had about Krusk, the orc in the player's handbook. I was gonna name the characters Krusk, Regdar, and all those people, but decided against it.
Plus, barbarians don't need intelligence, and Half-orcs/orcs get a -2.
So the orc in your comics has 16 tops, and Paladins don't even need intelligence. They need Wis for casting, Cha for turning, Str for attacking, Con for living, and maybe the lightly armored ones need Dex for dodging. They are NOT the skillmonkeys.
On a different note, I already have a lot of the jokes planned out for the next ten pages, so expect the best, and if it's not funny, then sorry.Last edited by Wreckingrocc; 2008-03-30 at 11:57 AM. Reason: Unexpected 'between' response
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2008-03-30, 09:59 AM (ISO 8601)
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Last edited by Wreckingrocc; 2008-03-30 at 10:00 AM. Reason: Taking out the sig, because it takes up space.
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2008-03-30, 10:05 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-03-30, 10:08 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
You use Grogg too much. Being unbelievably stupid isn't funny (well, only in reality).
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2008-03-30, 10:23 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-03-30, 10:33 AM (ISO 8601)
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I suppose technically speaking we could say that Brickwall's comic isn't "on the forums", since it's hosted on DeviantArt, which gives each image it's own page, rather than a filehoster and just posting the comic or a link to the image, as virtually every other comic does..
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2008-03-30, 10:35 AM (ISO 8601)
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Guess your right, maybe.
I think I saw this comic somewhere else, did you post it in the webcomics forum?Want an avatar? Shoot me a PM.
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2008-03-30, 10:41 AM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
Looks good. But try not to break the 4th wall. That is the main reason why comics lose fans. they re-use gags and stereotypes.
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2008-03-30, 10:47 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-03-30, 10:48 AM (ISO 8601)
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Yeah, but someone told me to move it here. It gets way more views way more quickly.
On the webcomics forum, it had 300 views and like 5 responses after 4 weeks.
Here, it has 11 views and 11 responses after an hour.
Also; New comic will be up in like 30 mins, tops. I'm adding the speech bubbles, and the formatting is all done.
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2008-03-30, 12:11 PM (ISO 8601)
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In page 4, the first panel, the speech bubbles are pointing to the wrong people. I think. If they are pointing to the right people, that would make these characters quite confusing indeed.
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2008-03-30, 12:21 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
*Pulls out a 'Men In Black Memory Flasher', puts on sunglases, and flashes everyone*
Sir, you must have been reading it wrong then. The bold, 16 font speech bubble is clearly pointing to Grogg, and the normal, 12 font speech bubble is clearly pointing to Kent.Last edited by Wreckingrocc; 2008-03-30 at 12:25 PM. Reason: Typo
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2008-03-30, 12:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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Takes of sunglass. Yes that was an illusion created by the sun being refracted by Venus's atmonshpere.
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2008-03-31, 06:38 PM (ISO 8601)
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Okay, I got two characters that will be a couple of important NPCs that the story will follow at certain periods of time. They're basically the 'Comedic Relief' characters (not really since it's all supposed to be funny. They are Kobolds who end up altering the plotline without actually encountering the characters. Here they are:
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2008-04-01, 02:36 AM (ISO 8601)
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They look cute, but shouldnt they be a more light color, one with yellow and red? Unless they are Swamp kobolds or other deviations of the base race.
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2008-04-01, 05:50 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-04-01, 04:41 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
bayar: They look cute, but shouldnt they be a more light color, one with yellow and red? Unless they are Swamp kobolds or other deviations of the base race.
They're forest Kobolds, but I did try the light color; it looks a little tacky. These are based on my cartoony paint versions, and I wanna know if I should change to a realsitic style to see if it looks better Does it?
Also, I've posted the Monster Manual's image of a Kobold. I think the skin is a little darker than Rich Burlew's Kobolds.
dallas-dakota: Seconded. And making them larger gives us a better view on the art
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2008-04-01, 07:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
Heh. I like it so far. One thing, however: Try not to overuse Grogg. He's really funny, but if he's your only source of humor, he'll get old fast. Not only that, but he'll overshadow your other characters.
Of course, it's only four strips in. It's looking great so far.
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2008-04-01, 09:27 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: -Title Soon to Come- (Comics)
It's okay, but Grogg is too overblown- he's so in your face that it's annoying and difficult to see why the others even put up with him at all... either tone him down or make him indispensible... right now he's so stupid that I'd be worried to have him at my back, personally.
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2008-04-02, 02:39 PM (ISO 8601)
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If Grogg were a bog, we would be in one harsh marsh!
Okay, not working, let's try another. Hmmm... If Grogg were a bog, we'd be 6 feet in some serious swamp soup.
Heh. Yeah. Mockingbyrd7 and Darkcloud nailed it. I third the opinion.
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2008-04-02, 07:50 PM (ISO 8601)
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Yeah, Grogg won't be appearing in the next like, three issues because of his idiocy. After he learns to fight (see what I mean when I post it), Grogg becomes amazing, and the characters put up with him because he's a moron (i.e. convincing him that his platinum is silver so they can trade for it all)
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2008-04-04, 04:42 PM (ISO 8601)
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New comic is up.
Comic 1, Page 5: Slyskarzenken and Zsaskazr
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2008-04-04, 05:06 PM (ISO 8601)
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Oh! I've got an idea for a title!
"Slice N' Dice"
It's a pun!
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2008-04-04, 05:50 PM (ISO 8601)
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Wow, that really is a great title... If nobody else posts in a week (by 4/11/08), Slice N' Dice is the Title for my comics!
Thank you very much.Last edited by Wreckingrocc; 2008-04-06 at 04:20 PM.
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2008-04-04, 08:22 PM (ISO 8601)
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Re: Slice N' Dice (A non-OOTS-Style Comic!)(Title may not be final)
Can we expect to see some banners soon then? If you like the title, you should just stick to it.
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2008-04-05, 01:03 AM (ISO 8601)
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2008-04-05, 02:30 AM (ISO 8601)
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