Notebook Sketches

[Vulion]

New stuff.

"Just once, I wish the exaggerations about the monsters I'm going after were bullsh*t..."

-Miles, Weretiger Adventurer

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"I'm a succubus, that means I have a PhD in mind f*ck."

-Olivia, Succubus

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"We're kinda married..."

-Miles and Olivia

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Just some demon dude.

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Just something I found funny.

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Special Request: Could you guys comment on my female form?

[memnarch]

It's pretty good; not glaringly wrong or anything. Of course, there are plenty of other people who actually have an eye for this sort of thing; I'm not in that category.


Drawings like this are quite nice; good size pose (even if there's no action), with some funny small/chibi sketches near them.

[Ninja Chocobo]

"I'm a succubus, that means I have a PhD in mind f*ck."

-Olivia, Succubus

And, of course, in regular ****.

[Vulion]

One more for the night.

"He's built to withstand anythin' from lightnin' bolts to boulders. He can tear anyone to shreds and burn 'em alive. I call him Willy."

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[Szilard]

Besides, she's already done Lying.

Anyway, awesome drawings are awesome.

[Uncle Festy]

One more for the night.

"He's built to withstand anythin' from lightnin' bolts to boulders. He can tear anyone to shreds and burn 'em alive. I call him Willy."

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Sauce.

[memnarch]

Heh, that last one reminds me of Robo.

[Vulion]

Update!

Thse two are human versions of the characters Nabi and Doki from the internet series The She Is!!! If ya haven't seen it, i would definitely recommend it. Very heart warming.

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"Never...EVER...try to make a deal with Regina. She'll break you."

-Marcus

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"You think I'm working for the Guardians of the Veil, they think I'm in league with you. Heh, I can't believe how narrow minded both of you are."

-Jason, Obromis Mage

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"Darkness is not evil. It is impartial. It is just...dark."

-The Black Knight

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[BRC]

Oooh, great work. Hey, I have a request if you don't mind.
Remember the Ogre Mob Boss I had you draw awhile back, well, this is for the same campaign. Pretty soon, the PC's are going to finally get face-to-face with their nemesiss, a scheming beguiler known only as "The Gambler". Visually, all I have is that he's human, wears pinstripe suits, and has a general "Gambling" theme. Nothing over-the-top like card suits printed all over his clothing, but maybe a deck of cards in hist pocket, or a hand of cards being held, or some dice, or maybe a lucky rabbits-foot on a string around his neck. Get creative.

[Vulion]

Small update!

I'm brewing somethings in my mind.

Marcus, the mad scientist!

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Regina, the bodyguard!

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[Uncle Festy]

That is all.

[Wolf53226]

Turning silent mode off to say that your work as alway Vulion is excellent, I just have an issue with Regina. Her right arm just looks awkward to me, been trying to think of what it is, but the only thing I can think of is that maybe she is keeping that elbow too close to her body to be nature to put a glove on that way, and that is what it looks like she is doing. Hope that is considered constructive criticism, keep up the excellent work, I have enjoyed the characters you have brought us.

[Vulion]

BRC:

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EDIT: Thanks, Wolf.

[BRC]

BRC:

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Most Perfect, Thankee!
*Glee*
Though, what's that thing on his neck, a Tatoo?

[Vulion]

Hey, just one drawing this time but I really want your opinions, even if it's for the the hundredth time or it's your first time posting. It's Marcus, last time I redesigned the guy it was as a joke idea that flashed in my mind. This time it's more permanent and I want your honest opinions.

"There's three way to deal with a guy running away with your score. Shoot them in the leg, shoot them in the arm or shoot them in the head. It depends whether you want to leave 'em limp or just turn them into a gimp. Either way you get your score."

-Marcus, Professional Thief

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EDIT: Yes, BRC that is a tattoo. It's a big 'A' as in ace.

[memnarch]

Hmmm... the torso seems a flat, or blocky, or something. Lack of curved lines I guess. The rest of him has lines that suggest he's 3-d but the grid/fence thing on the chest doesn't help at all.

[Elder Tsofu]

It's nice, but the right gun seem very flat, almost like its a cardboard cutout.
I had a bit of difficulty seeing the swordhilt first, as the lines at the top merge with the arms bottompart. But that might be for my tired state...

[Vulion]

Hmmm... the torso seems a flat, or blocky, or something. Lack of curved lines I guess. The rest of him has lines that suggest he's 3-d but the grid/fence thing on the chest doesn't help at all.

Well, that's the stitching on his vest. What do you think would help make it seem less blocky?

It's nice, but the right gun seem very flat, almost like its a cardboard cutout.
I had a bit of difficulty seeing the swordhilt first, as the lines at the top merge with the arms bottompart. But that might be for my tired state...

Well, I was kinda looking at a reference picture for the gun and I guess I translated it a bit too literally onto the page.

The hilt does kinda merge...d'oh!

[memnarch]

Curve them a little for something like this

instead of


Basically, give it depth somehow.

[Vulion]

Thanks for the feedback on Marcus, guys. Now, it's time for his partner to make an appearance. Keep in mind, I'm probably gonna change her hairstyle. Same thing, please constructively critique.

"You can try to run away but either he'll shoot you or I'll catch up. And trust me when I say, you want the former to happen because the latter will hurt a lot more."

-Regina, Professional Thief

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[Assassin89]

Regina looks like Captain Jack Sparrow put on a belt of masculinity/femininity, which is an interesting image in itself.

[Vulion]

Hmm, I don't wanna make her into a female Jack Sparrow...though the idea does give me others.

Here's Regina, re-made, kinda...the hair style pissed me off for some reason, so I changed it.

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[OverWilliam]

The only thing I can add to the discussion of the first pic (Marcus) is that the seam of his right pant leg (our left) seems to cross over his knee...

To the first Regina pic I say something about the face seems off. I'm not sure if it's the hair like you were saying or a side-effect of the hair, or I'm not sure, but you cleared it up quite nicely with the second. Also, I like the simpler look for her-- the Badass Longcoat is pretty, well, Badass, but the second one is better. The gun doesn't look right, however. I'll see about finding a source pic with somebody holding a gun in the over-shoulder position for reference.

[Vulion]

The only thing I can add to the discussion of the first pic (Marcus) is that the seam of his right pant leg (our left) seems to cross over his knee...

To the first Regina pic I say something about the face seems off. I'm not sure if it's the hair like you were saying or a side-effect of the hair, or I'm not sure, but you cleared it up quite nicely with the second. Also, I like the simpler look for her-- the Badass Longcoat is pretty, well, Badass, but the second one is better. The gun doesn't look right, however. I'll see about finding a source pic with somebody holding a gun in the over-shoulder position for reference.

Thanks for the advice.

ANOTHER pic of Regina. I like the hair, necktie and the sash/belt combo she has, so I kept all of those.

Once again, please comment.

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[CrimsonAngel]

I liked the second oe more.

[memnarch]

Is that a gun or a piece of cardboard? It's looking a little too flat.

[Elder Tsofu]

Is that a gun or a piece of cardboard? It's looking a little too flat.

I think it is supposed to be a carboardgun, just to fit in with marcus dito.

I like this one better (more cloth on the girls!), although the *searching for word* ... thingy.. in her hair seem to be curving so it ends in front of her right ear - I suppose it is meant to end behind both ears.

[Vulion]

What would you guys suggest? I'm trying for a more steampunkish look without going into heavy metal and gauges and goggles and what not...

[Vulion]

ANOTHER Regina.

Oi, this particular project might take a while...

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EDIT: To all those that have had the patience to suffer through this.

Haley:

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I also did a sexy Lien drawing for the House of Fanservice, if anyone is interested.

[memnarch]

The main problem that I've seen is that there are inconsistencies between 3d and 2d. Parts of your pictures look 3d (shading, texture lines, curves) and some don't (like that gun).

Recent picture (not fan-service one): clothing is good, it appears to curve around a body, same with the belt; the little black rectangle thing isn't, if it were a real object I would expect that it would be cutting into her side, right now it's too flat.


The Haley fan-service is very nicely done.