Bibliography II

[BRC]

If I were blind, I'd totally wear one of those!

Great job as always, Elagune!

I would go for the double eyepatch.

[Lix Lorn]

I'd go for the blindfold. Very cool.

As is tha art. Elagune, you rock way more than you know.

[Kunoichi777]

Also, what is this artist-insecurity? Your art is great, as always.

I agree with BRC. i love your art! i respect that you're trying to make it even better, but make sure you remember that it's good right now, too! ;)

the "friends" picture is really cool. it's always nice to get a poster picture of the characters in full color. :) will we be getting more of these?

[Lord Raziere]

I'm thinking Cretan codex will have spells that do things like increase the caster's size, or otherwise augment his melee capabilities. And maybe some sort of horn-themed projectile.

The cost, I think, will be related to the labyrinth. Some sort of inability to tell direction and a tendency to get lost in even the most straight forward of paths. This could extend to a mental issue as well as a physical one. The "ultimate spell" for the codex could be to trap your opponent in your own mental maze, making it difficult for them to cast spells or think clearly.

so what, the Cretan Codex turns the person into Ryoga?

[Viera Champion]

I still personally like Opal's way of covering her eyes with the winter cap pulled down over them.

[Mina Kobold]

Friends

Since I felt a little down about my art, I decided to try and take it a step further. This was originally going to be a painting, but I'm terrible with paintings so I decided to do it with flat colours instead. I really like the colours I ended up using.

D'aww, now I feel extra sorry for them

Don't worry, your art is great. I wish my art was great, oh well, practise practise

[Zeful]

so what, the Cretan Codex turns the person into Ryoga?

4 pages to late on the joke.

So you want to turn Raul into Ryoga? That's mean.

[Hyoumu Yau]

Don't worry to much about your art seeming bad to you - it was great from the beginning, and it's already much better than it was then

And if we are talking about art, a question : Did you take classes or did you learn by using some kind of textbooks/instructions?

so what, the Cretan Codex turns the person into Ryoga?

Nice one
Still, that would be too cruel, don't you think?

[Yorrin]

Beautiful artwork! I especially like the choices you made with the lighting.

so what, the Cretan Codex turns the person into Ryoga?

I had to look Ryoga up the first time someone made this comment. I promise it was unintentional.

[Elagune]

Page 17

Thanks for the encouragement guys.

Here's the new page. I didn't draw a single pair of eyes on this page.

[CoffeeIncluded]

Ah yes, eyes are difficult...

And now Raoul is getting mixed up in this?

[Fayd]

...Uh oh. I see conflict coming. Page gangs are responsible for the ink, or so it is implied. Now Raoul is kind of accidentally part of a page gang. Tony might go to Ben with this information, leading to a rather awkward confrontation later... And Ben still doesn't know his friend is a Page now.

[Claudius Maximus]

"Whether" is missing an "e" in the first panel.

[Tono]

Mad props. People who can draw always amaze me.

[licoot]

Is it just me or does it seam inevitable that raoul is gonna end up being used as a tool by the guys who make ink, and then ben is gonna end up having to fight him

[Yorrin]

Cliffhangers like that are just cruel

But seriously, good job of building suspense toward a big reveal.

[Lix Lorn]

I agree with every comment so far. Badass. Worrying. Dramatic!

[IcemanJRC]

You're fantastic. And it's normal to not like your own art, I get that, but you don't need to be so dissatisfied with it, you're phenomenal. One of the handful of people with the talent and dedication to be great.

[Viera Champion]

As the plot advances, I find my anxiety for Opal's first appearance growing.

[John Cribati]

As the plot advances, I find my anxiety for Opal's first appearance growing.

I'm betting on Charlie showing up first...

[Viera Champion]

Yeah well... Opal existed first so take that! Cuz iiiiii articulated in BibliographyITP.

[ref]

Cliffhanger!

[Silverraptor]

Love how things are going in your story, Elagune. And I want to contribute atleast one character to it as well. So keep an eye out.

[Gez]

Tony's dad becomes Mr Exposition. I expected Tony to say "Yeah, I already know all that" at the end.

[Yorrin]

Tony's dad becomes Mr Exposition. I expected Tony to say "Yeah, I already know all that" at the end.

I was all ready to start calling Tony "Tony Exposition," but I went back and read the early chapters and Elagune did give him a last name: Montague.

[John Cribati]

I was all ready to start calling Tony "Tony Exposition," but I went back and read the early chapters and Elagune did give him a last name: Montague.

There needs to be someone named Capulet now, just for kicks.

[Lix Lorn]

There needs to be someone named Capulet now, just for kicks.

Yes.
Seconded.

[Viera Champion]

It has never once in the comic been called Codex of the All Seeing Eye, or All Seeing Eye Codex or anything else with the word Eye used. The 'Eye' part to the best of my knowledge seems to have come from some people inadvertently adding it on when mentioning it in the original discussion thread. Elagune may have also referred to it such once or twice in response to those comments as well, but it was most likely a typo caused by everyone else mentioning it with the 'Eye' tacked on.

Also, it likely would be best not to clutter this thread, so if you reply to this, please do so in the main discussion thread and we will carry on there.

Owrtho

Why does it matter? I will now call it what I will. End of conversation.

[IcemanJRC]

Jeez, this is like the third time you guys are having this argument/disagreement.

[Viera Champion]

Really? I thought the last argument was about whether eyedolls referred to the floating eyes or the pages of the Codex of the All-Seeing Eye.