Bibliography II

[Gez]

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New page up.

Lately I've been heavily unsatisfied with my work, spending at least two hours on every panel. It's been really, really bugging me.

They look good, though. Clean, legible, nice dramatic shading. Okay, the last panel is a bit cheap art-wise. But it works anyway.

If I had to criticize your art, I'd mention how panel 3 here could have been split in two (first "you're kidding me" with Ben's face, then just "ri-" and the scorch mark) to make the sequence of event clearer. Or the cheekmouth in panel 3 here (they're always a pet peeve of mine). But this latest page has nothing that bugs me.

[BRC]

Your art looks fine to me.
Also, Lol at the little battlecruiser commander poster in panel 4.

[Yorrin]

More art of Tony's dad! Huzzah!

But such a sinister look in panel 3. That's foreshadowing if I ever saw it (in both the artistic and literary sense).

Yeah, the art still looks great to me. Fifty times better than any other webcomic that has existed for such a short period of time. I think that the more you struggle through the problems you have with it and experiment with the art the more you're going to grow as an artist. Or at least, that's what my artist friends tell me.

[Eldrys]

Every artist needs a break sometimes. Sometimes it's for the better.

Think of it this way; good things come for those who wait. If Elagune takes a rest, he can come back making things awesomer than they already are.

Darn It! Why do you have to be right!

[Maximum Zersk]

Darn It! Why do you have to be right!

Because I'm me.

[Tulio d Bard]

Everyone needs some rest from times to times. And maybe you're putting too much pressure over your shoulders.

Also, Lol at the little battlecruiser commander poster in panel 4.

And don't forget the "Bear with it!" one.

[TheAmishPirate]

Everyone needs some rest from times to times. And maybe you're putting too much pressure over your shoulders.



And don't forget the "Bear with it!" one.

Or the badly-drawn wanted poster of a certain somebody.

[Maximum Zersk]

Oh yeah, another trope. Irony.

[Elagune]

Yeah, Tony's dad might be kind of stern-looking, but I imagine him as the kind of guy who loves decorating his office space with all sorts of wacky knick-knacks and pictures of his family on vacation and all that jazz.

Word of God says he collects motivational posters.

I don't think I'll be taking a break after this chapter, since I already took quite a long one when I went on vacation, but I think I'll be doing more experimenting with the pages. Well, not like I haven't been experimenting a lot.

Tony's dad in Chapter 6.
Tony's dad in Chapter 9.

[Lix Lorn]

I think he looks better now. Long hair doesn't suit him. XD

Don't force yourself now! (Hugs)

[Maximum Zersk]

And his head looks more defined.

[Fayd]

Word of God says he collects motivational posters.[/URL]

Does "motivational posters" also include the sometimes funny "de-motivational posters"?

[chionophile]

I think he looks better now. Long hair doesn't suit him. XD

Don't force yourself now! (Hugs)

And his head looks more defined.

Also his eyebrows are black now, and his nose is skinnier too. I like his head shape much better as well - the square jaw lends more of a feeling of strength to him.

[Kunoichi777]

i love how this plot is unfolding. i anxiously await the conclusion of this conversation. :)

keep up the good work!!

[licoot]

I didn't realize that the comic is ahead here from where its hosted, and I got confused about what people were talking about

anyway I just caught up, that last comic really pieces the story together

[Gez]

If this picks up again, could you tell us in this thread too?

[Silverraptor]

I notice that his dad's white hair switched sides between those two chapters.

[memnarch]

White hair is on the same side still.

[Silverraptor]

White hair is on the same side still.

Looks different to me...>.> Let me check again.

Edit: *Facepalm*

*Gives a bat to Elagune*

*Bends over and points to back of head*

Please hit with the bat. Don't hold back.

[HellfireLover]

Looks different to me...>.> Let me check again.

Edit: *Facepalm*

*Gives a bat to Elagune*

*Bends over and points to back of head*

Please hit with the bat. Don't hold back.

For a few seconds there, I was thinking "Why would you want to be hit with a bat? It would get its wings all tangled up in your hair and the poor thing might hurt itself and- ohhhhhh THAT type of bat."

[licoot]

For a few seconds there, I was thinking "Why would you want to be hit with a bat? It would get its wings all tangled up in your hair and the poor thing might hurt itself and- ohhhhhh THAT type of bat."

Me to, but I was more confused about him giving the bat, i didn't even get that far

[Tulio d Bard]

For a few seconds there, I was thinking "Why would you want to be hit with a bat? It would get its wings all tangled up in your hair and the poor thing might hurt itself and- ohhhhhh THAT type of bat."

And I needed your comment to understand. lol

[Elagune]

Friends

Since I felt a little down about my art, I decided to try and take it a step further. This was originally going to be a painting, but I'm terrible with paintings so I decided to do it with flat colours instead. I really like the colours I ended up using.

[licoot]

Friends

Since I felt a little down about my art, I decided to try and take it a step further. This was originally going to be a painting, but I'm terrible with paintings so I decided to do it with flat colours instead. I really like the colours I ended up using.

Awesome

I don't know why but I feel really sorry for Roy

[CoffeeIncluded]

Roy...

[Fayd]

Friends

Since I felt a little down about my art, I decided to try and take it a step further. This was originally going to be a painting, but I'm terrible with paintings so I decided to do it with flat colours instead. I really like the colours I ended up using.

Looks amazing to me. Very nicely done!

[BRC]

I wonder why Roy uses a blindfold while most all-seeing prefer dark sunglasses (Which are less conspicuous)?
Also, what is this artist-insecurity? Your art is great, as always.

[licoot]

I wonder why Roy uses a blindfold while most all-seeing prefer dark sunglasses (Which are less conspicuous)?
Also, what is this artist-insecurity? Your art is great, as always.

I assumed it was because he wore it when he was going blind, which I presumed he had to wear it because of surgery

[vicente408]

I hadn't even thought that the eyedolls would be color-coded to their user, but I guess that makes sense.

Love this comic, and love your artwork in general, Elagune!

[Tulio d Bard]

I wonder why Roy uses a blindfold while most all-seeing prefer dark sunglasses (Which are less conspicuous)?
Also, what is this artist-insecurity? Your art is great, as always.

If I were blind, I'd totally wear one of those!

Great job as always, Elagune!